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02-01-05, 04:36 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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Hide From Life
IP: 0825 899A
Yo life is hard when you all alone jealous of those wit no broken home keep 2 my self n watchin da world go by payin no mind just thinkin thru my eyes Mysteriously lurkin,puttin on a show das deliriously workin insides is hurtin, but da outsides is worse-n- n thru my eyes da world is twirkin people lyin,killin n hurtin still cryin n perpin wonderin why its i dat da devil is flirtin but da blame iz on me i wasnt lookin at da possibilities for me 2 be freed,i stay hidden-and down my abilities but Ju's gonna rise,fuck my demise......my rhymes'll neva die, da tears i'll never cry, my fear ill never hide its clear in my eyes, what i must do to survive come out da dark,drop da mask and let my heart re-vive Last edited by Judicial : 02-01-05 at 05:52 PM. |
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02-01-05, 05:45 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo come on give me some feed back please....
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02-01-05, 08:32 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 28AD 5545
yo please yo...dont sleep on it...can i pleaze get some feedback on dis
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02-01-05, 11:14 PM
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My Dick Stay Wet
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IP: 0825 899A
YO!!!!! there is 13 people viewin open mics and cant not 1 of yall drop some feedback????c'mon yo...ill return da feedback too shit come one
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02-02-05, 01:15 AM
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Life is a Constant Battle
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IP: 404C 71FB
yo ill be honest ya need a little more to your piece n the length wise but ill tell ya it was alright...i give ya a 7/10 for your emotion, unique structure, and try to complexity ya vocab...if ya need more feed holla back other wise check out my apocalypse
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02-02-05, 11:12 AM
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New to RV
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IP: D282 66C5
I liked it...........I Liked The Structure.........
I Liked The Flow Somewhat......... The Only Thing Is It Could Have Been A Lil Longer...........Otha Than Dat It was Good Keep Doin What U Do And Return Da Fava
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They say I'm Krazi-Insane, Cause I'll Set Ya Body In Flames, Split Ya Brain, And Eat Ya Heart To Start My Day -Krazi-Insane Go To War Wit Da Mormons, Take A Bath Wit Da Catholics, In Holy Water, No Wonder They Tryna Hold Me Under Longer -Eminem The Weed Can't Get No Better -Bizzy Bone   
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