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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Capitol 4 44.44%
Hammer 5 55.56%
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Old 02-10-05, 07:01 PM   #1
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Capitol vs Hammer

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DQ'ed for recycled / similar Walt Disney line to http://community.rapverse.com/showp...134&postcount=4
 
Old 02-10-05, 07:01 PM   #2
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Hammer has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 07:01 PM.
 
Old 02-10-05, 07:02 PM   #3
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Capitol has ACCEPTED this battle on 02-10-05 07:02 PM.
 
Old 02-10-05, 07:14 PM   #4
Cekret
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I'm Puttin The "Hammer" On His Career Quicker Then He Can React
Impact His Brain, Infact, I'll Crack Him Man, And That's Laying A Fact
His Only Chances Of Beating Me Is In Imaginated Scheme Like Walt Disney
Kid's So Whack He Has To Make 50 Free Agent Threads Saying
Pick Me
I'll Slam His Punches With Another Loss Leaving Him With A Record Of 1-5
He Couldn't Flow If He Was Water, So I Form A Damn And Leave Him 1 Side
You Got One Win, Shit The Vote System Must Of Had A Sevier Glitch
This Prick Get His Head Split With A Axe Kid And Now, I'm Boning His Bitch....................
 
Old 02-10-05, 07:32 PM   #5
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Capitol’s like my pet reptile kept in captivity
Crafty using an alias to keep his activity*
Wrist actions been pumped too much recently
Guessing ya friends wins like u been stalkin and sleazy**
Ya cheesy rhymes aint winning you shit you herb
Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard”
Word to that, herb is slapped, got nerdy chats
Don’t need to work in an abattoir to murder this cat***


*his alias got no wins so he dont battle much on this one
**posted a guess at Poetic's thread for how many wins he has altogether
***abattoirs are where they kill animals
 
Old 02-10-05, 09:53 PM   #6
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This was feedback posted for Capitol

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G-drop capitol. ....................
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Old 02-10-05, 10:04 PM   #7
Armada Da 187
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Voted For: Capitol

Voted for Capitol

Cap got dis due to heavier punches

Ok flow for both was good so that ened up in a tie I could stay with both of you so hats off to both of u for that

Punches (Most important in battlin) went to:
Cap he came stronger n more to the point now Hammer had sum punches as well but they werent as storng plus I seen one of his lines n another song earlier battle earlier in this day


THE LINE OF REPEAT: By Hammer
Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard”
The same line n another battle cant member who but the battle was posted a while ago so it is newer then this battle but if it is a meer coinsidence it still wouldnt matter this does not effect my vote!

Hammer ya flow was good
structure was good as well
ya punches fell a little short
multies neither seemed to have any
Personals- have to give it to Capitol (the whole record thing)

Breakdown:
Flow- Tie
Structure- Tie
Punches- Cap
Multies- Neither
Personals- Cap

Good battle overall

CAP- 7/10
HAM- 5/10

holla back return the fav fams

Not Hatin, Jus votin
Plz dont hate vote me for postin honest votes homies plz
 
Old 02-10-05, 10:06 PM   #8
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^^Thanks Man, Good Looking, I'll Return The Favor When I Get Back, Drop Another Vote For My Other Battle, And I'll Return The Favor Twice
 
Old 02-11-05, 06:09 PM   #9
Cekret
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Old 02-11-05, 08:16 PM   #10
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Old 02-11-05, 10:52 PM   #11
Cekret
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Old 02-12-05, 01:50 AM   #12
.Ike.
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Voted For: Capitol

Capitol.......
I'm Puttin The "Hammer" On His Career Quicker Then He Can React
Impact His Brain, Infact, I'll Crack Him Man, And That's Laying A Fact
decent opener here....hit pretty good

His Only Chances Of Beating Me Is In Imaginated Scheme Like Walt Disney
Kid's So Whack He Has To Make 50 Free Agent Threads Saying Pick Me
lol nice personal.....hit great...

I'll Slam His Punches With Another Loss Leaving Him With A Record Of 1-5
He Couldn't Flow If He Was Water, So I Form A Damn And Leave Him 1 Side
nice...i was feelin this

You Got One Win, Shit The Vote System Must Of Had A Sevier Glitch
This Prick Get His Head Split With A Axe Kid And Now, I'm Boning His Bitch....................
i liked the set up line...but didnt like the punch....should have closed it w/ something different

Hammer..............
Capitol’s like my pet reptile kept in captivity
Crafty using an alias to keep his activity*
decent opener...ok personal here...could have been worded a lot better

Wrist actions been pumped too much recently
Guessing ya friends wins like u been stalkin and sleazy**
again should have worded it different...but still an ok personal

Ya cheesy rhymes aint winning you shit you herb
Bitches like capitol “should be seen and not heard”
hit decently here......

Word to that, herb is slapped, got nerdy chats
Don’t need to work in an abattoir to murder this cat***
pretty good wordplay here...nice way to close it out....



overall..........i felt capitol had the more consistent verse of the two.....his punches hit a lot better....both had nice personals......originality goes to capitol......so vote goes to cap for harder hitting punches and creativity
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Old 02-12-05, 03:01 AM   #13
Cekret
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Old 02-12-05, 03:15 AM   #14
MaRVJay
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Voted For: Capitol

u got cap...hammer alrite u had good personal concepts but how u worded dem was real wack and u tried da make ya whole verse personal switch it up spit a hott punchline like ya last line....cap good verse some of ya lines b long so fix dat up u had a few nice punhclines and u switched it up instead of makin ya whole shit personal which was good...u were more consistant thru out dis battle

opener-cap
strucuture-hamm
punchlines-cap
multis-cap had a few
wordplay-cap
personals-hamm took dat by alot
finisher-hamm even tho u could of worded it betta
enjoyed-cap....overrall his verse was betta
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Old 02-12-05, 01:39 PM   #15
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