i click my rhyme book open and i turn to the centre page/its where my lyrics and my mind combine to help put words together in a contageous way/my spit causes inflammation to the untouchable parts of the brain/that way my verses are susceptible in church i virtually clasp your hands to pray/so put yo hands together cause this is my first day on the case/im a lyrical saviour im only acceptin gods praise/so any haters or fakers who want to challenge me the star line up of the LA Lakers your just comedy chasers/so keep runnin like biggie and pac im a mixture of the greatest/so put your flicks in the suggestion box and i'll pick out the most tastless!

ehhhh it was alright, i woulda enjoyed reading it more is you pressed eneter after you finished a line but whatever, you stretched a few lines, really far, i liek the last line of the entire thing though, it was pretty decent, overall it was pretty decent, elevate.. gian some respect. nah mean?

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werd to enter at the end of a line.
try selecting the whole peice then centreing it.

seen as it is a text peice,presentation helps,alot.

rhymes are ok..flow is a bit off seen as the structures messed..(easily fixed with how i told you before)

content is ok..
keep dropping.
return the feed link in sig.