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02-17-05, 12:12 PM | #1 | |||||
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am i worthy of a crew?
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boy i'll shoot first..keepin you on ya p's and q's nigga blast through ya fake coogi like i was a q dawg nigga "cuban" niggaz get "boxed" out..i run up in ya house "geometry" style..my crew "triangle" ya spouse cuz we straight up run trains wit 3 niggaz and one dame doin tha same thang..gettin pussy and gettin brain they call me tha "BLACK" mayne..but im "afro-american" to u dudes different "bases" i steal..grabbin "bats" to smash ya crews im new to some jews, but horrifyin to catholics and im a baptis..only one "father" so its death to tha "bastards" i master tha style of wu-tang to punch u in ya grill and leave u to rot like "cavities"..too much "hawiian punch" in ya grill and life is real short..cuz death is certain to yall i mull innocent bystanders jus for standin by too long im so far ahead of my time, my own sould gotta "ketchup" and i'll slap tha taste out ya mouth for tryin to "mustard" up a "match up" so, do any crews fill dis? if not its iight. LEAVE FEEDBACK. i need tha critics help. drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 Last edited by intensify effect : 02-18-05 at 08:10 AM. |
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02-17-05, 12:49 PM | #2 | |||||||
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IP: 964F D870
can i get some feedback plz
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02-17-05, 12:53 PM | #3 | ||||
E-Style, Bitch.
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You aight, decent wordplay for the most part, few nice metas too.............
Wanna collab? i'm mad bored, you choose thwe topic, i'll work on the hook an i'll post a verse to you thru pm, just get at me with a topic my nigga
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02-17-05, 01:02 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 964F D870
iight, cool wit me. let me think a bit
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02-17-05, 02:12 PM | #5 | |||||
Cus I Jus Ma$fit Dis Shit
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IP: 964F D870
shit was nice 4real...i was feelin tha metaz and yo structure was iight...its cool though kid...u a newb but u cool in my book...keep up tha good work...8.5/10...~1~
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02-17-05, 04:46 PM | #6 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: A3EA 639E
good nice concept & i like it overall quality was official i would give it 8.5/10
also make sure 2 return the favor in my open mic |
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02-17-05, 07:53 PM | #7 | |||||||
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IP: 5308 6668
thanx yall. mos def appreciated
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02-17-05, 08:18 PM | #8 | |||||||
WESTCOAST
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IP: 28AD 5545
dis was koo
but its sum wak crews so...................... |
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02-18-05, 08:09 AM | #9 | |||
Banned
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IP: A1EC 8B20
drop a link with-in 24 hours or this will be closed... http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=165166 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=170910 |
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02-18-05, 10:32 AM | #10 | |||||||
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IP: 5308 6668
^^^iight, dammit. im bout to
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02-18-05, 10:34 AM | #11 | |||||||
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IP: 5308 6668
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02-18-05, 04:51 PM | #12 | |||||||
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IP: 5308 6668
uppin.....uppin.....uppin
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02-18-05, 05:56 PM | #13 | |||||||
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IP: 5308 6668
uppin.................................
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02-28-05, 08:48 PM | #14 | |||||
Out-Spoken
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IP: AF76 A123
this was weak as fuck...how the hell you gonna diss nas...and his latest album..when you can;t even put together a decent punchline
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02-28-05, 08:53 PM | #15 | |||||||
a.k.a prozak
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IP: B845 C898
yo i agree a little with everybody except for dolla (no offense Dolla, it wasn't that good) u do need ta work on your punchlines and vocab, but i see u threw in some effort ta throw in some punches and that so i'll give a 5.5/10 elevate
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