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Please read therily...
Im strappin up, hit the streets niggaz backin up, now they meek. cash stackin' up, packin heat like sun rayz nomore fun dayz know its all about jewlry and gun blaze. in my hood, thats how shit get settled who ever got the loudest metal whoeva drink the most, and hit the pedal. but we dont call it ghetto we call it home. wit plenty fiendz to tha stone. this is where they roam. You gotta have either black or the chrome cuz they got taps on the phone fuck up once and that could be a cap to your dome. Or they could fract-ure your bones. and leave you on the dumbsta belive me kid, i seen niggaz lose they head ova dumb stuff. Thats why if you show luv, i show luv. But if theres hatred in your heart, there is no luv. cuz they cant co-exist dont get lost in the mist of jelousy cuz thats a frozen-abyss. listen kid theres so much lessons to learn. the best is to earn but in this life you either freeze or you burn............ |
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And For An Impressive Encore You Can Tune In To Sesame Street This Friday Night At 8am Eastern Time On PBS Networks
ONCE AGAIN u came with Wack SHIT!!!....just quit Hip-Hop....4real though.....i aint hating but u just makin this open mic look like the "thug" Mc Hammer is Ghost writing....damn just get ya shit together.....4real Peace.... 1........... |
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damn dogg why you gotta hate like that.....
you got beef wit dis nigga or somthin.... it wasnt that fuckin bad..... i think that you came all right.... you didnt use complex vocab (which i dont like neway)., but you did work with a complex rhyme scheme.... ill give props where props are due and i think you came correct...... my only advice is shake all them bitch hatas off oh ya....try to give feedback on some of mah shit stay elevatin 1 |
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IP: F77C 8691
most def Damani, im always checkin out your shit. thanx
Rawdeadly? lol, sound like that white british bitch from American Idol on FOX. Keep doing your thing though.... |
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nice concept..all though i did lack in structure. it was a little simple, but the idea, like i said, was diggable. Keep doin ya thing yo, and don't get discouraged.
Flow On.... |
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Was kinda simple...Good concept like Black said...Just keep elevating...100
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Damani-DaGrinch "my only advice is shake all them bitch hatas off"
How was his Cock being that it's real FAR DOWN ya throat feel like? anyways....if u wanna spray off....go ahead but make sure u spray hard or not at all....and please no "thug" shit like ya cock suckin buddy just posted cuz Trust that shitty ass style will get destroyed..... Peace..... 1............ |
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its pretty tite..simple words..yet complex understanding..
Aight peaz |
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hold up cuzz.....dont start runnin yo fuckin lips........
ill fuckin destroy you and expose you for the dick rydin bitch that you really are |
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Trust me Nigga 5 lines from me will Burn up ya WHOLE ENTIRE lil rap notebook you write ya wack shit in....and if u wanna test it.....just go ahead but like i typed b4......make sure u spray hard....or not at all......Fag.....
Peace...... 1............ Ps:.....Make sure ya lyrics wear a Fire Proof Suit on.....bitch |
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Thats why if you show luv,
i show luv. Im feelin this although it was simple ... it had potential ... Elevate ur vocab/flow ... Keep doin ur thang, keep it real ... Fav Lines v But if theres hatred in your heart, there is no luv. cuz they cant co-exist dont get lost in the mist of jelousy cuz thats a frozen-abyss. listen kid theres so much lessons to learn. the best is to earn but in this life you either freeze or you burn ~1~ |
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