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Old 05-26-05, 02:34 PM   #1
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Old 05-26-05, 03:18 PM   #2
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this is some pretty good shit ma...u should spit more often...i like this...everything really seems on point, ain't nothing i can really get on cause their weren't to many flaws...keep droppin shit like this ma
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she sounds retarded who the fuck is that? and why do the previous posts say she sound good. ok anyways, the chorus is horrible at least hit one note correct. and fade this girl's singing or something it's annoying. this is not cd material. get a better singer first. no hate but Yahweh! shit's horrible what the fuck is the taste on this site. 2/10

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Old 05-26-05, 09:32 PM   #3
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word thnx for feed uppin for more critique.
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Old 05-26-05, 11:27 PM   #4
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Beat is... diff, not a fan doe lol

not feeln the voice 100%, but ya flow is on point, delevery could use some work.
Lower beat volume a lil, 1 db prob.
Lyrics are ight. no chorus?

hmm sc just shut down.. couldnt hear 2nd verse

from what i heard its ight

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Old 05-27-05, 08:52 PM   #5
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the chorus was the first thing you heard...and it played after the first verse and after the second..thnx for feedback uppin for more.
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Old 05-27-05, 11:15 PM   #6
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Your quality sucks.....flow is ok..beat is weak to me ma....I could really here the lyrics so i wont judge
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Old 05-27-05, 11:32 PM   #7
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Couldnt* .....coo shit
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Old 05-28-05, 07:23 PM   #8
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your flow's better, now all you gotta do is turn ya damn vocals up nigra ...definetly your flow is way better than when I last heard you so that's a major plus ma...get at me about a good vocal EDITing process I got from Milkman ma...lyrics far as I could actually hear were real though ma, keep doin' it...
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Old 06-14-05, 02:28 AM   #9
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word felt like upping. so i am
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right away i ain't feelin this beat... too computer soundin, really shitty synths...
you got decent flow... quality could be way upp'd.. sound like your vocals are on the left channel really strong to, your addlibs or an echo on the right.. it sounds weird,
lyrically i got no problems with the track, work on the delivery at places, you put a lil too much emphasys on the wrong places some time.. ne-way yo, shit's i'ight still...

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