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Old 02-20-05, 04:55 AM   #1
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Footsteps (redone)
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I used 50 cents footsteps chorus with a little change i aint done its just a quick drop telll me what you think and im down for a collab on this


[LexiKon]

Sometimes this world is to sick to see,
that all it brings along is pain and misery,

so when i need to take a time out i put on pac and he speaks to me,

"i wake up in the mornin and i ask myself,
is life worth livin should i blast myself",

memorys of better days rushin through my mind,
i wish i could just say fuck this and leave it all behind,


why dont i pull the trigger while this gun as at my temple,
just one bullet can end my it'd be simple,

but i couldn't stand for my mom to shed a tear,

i cant be the one to fullfil her deepest fear,

no matter the pressur i gotta keep my head above the water,
ima make it through this life thats been nothin but mindless slaughter,

i ain't givin up ain't an ounce of quiter in me,
thats the breakdown put plain and simply,


[Chorus: 50 Cent - repeat 2X]
First there was two sets of footprints in the sand,

Then there was one set of footprints in the sand,


When times get hard and i aint got a plan,

God don't walk with me, he carry me man,
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Old 02-20-05, 05:40 AM   #2
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i liked it nice opener i really liked the closer nice flow and structre 7/10
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Old 02-20-05, 10:27 AM   #3
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This open mic was allright. It was kind of short...but it got the point across. Only thing I didn't really like is how you quoted other people in it. But other than that good drop man. 6.5/10

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...664#post1971664

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Old 03-20-05, 04:33 PM   #4
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thanks for the feedback upin
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Old 03-20-05, 08:30 PM   #5
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This shit was kinda short, but it was still at good quality. I was feelin it. I felt it flowed good and all, and i think you came out strong wit tha opener, and stayed that way til the end. Nice shit. 7/10



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