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03-28-05, 04:54 PM
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Before Death Thoughts
IP: 20B2 DF4A
Nigga, I'm not gonna lie im fuckin scared
Already strapped into the electric chair Close my eyes, about to die Good thing its dark; can't see me cryin Done wrong before, For good im tryin I swear to God i be damned if im lyin I swear Lord, if i could turn around i would Instead of endin my life for good Erase the alleged homicide Now, nobody's ever by my side I guess for my actions, this is my cost These are my before death thoughts ^--- leave some feedback |
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03-28-05, 10:04 PM
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IP: 28AD 5545
nice poem man, i was really feeling this, nice vocabulary and topic, i liked how personable your opener was, it made it more about you, keep dropping..1
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03-29-05, 03:59 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
yo thanks man... keep feedback goin
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03-30-05, 09:28 PM
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IP: 20B2 DF4A
uppin leave the feeedback
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