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04-01-05, 01:14 PM
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"Verbal Arts"- Origin
IP:
my verbal arts leave u on the verge of scarred
cause I'm heartless like a deck of cards with nothing but spades clubs and diamonds i got 99 problems, and not 1 is rhymin and i dont like to brag, but im full of myself so how could i act like anyone else? so i dont get writers block, im imune to it i melt it like ice cubes when i spit and my lyrics are always below the street im underground, cuz music is first nature to me and nature calls at least 50 times a week i got no patience like a doctor with no degree and you could call me a rapping prostitute cuz i dont give a fuck unless im gettin money from u im off the wall like a poster of r.kelly after the sex tape failed to be burried My Reply Link
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04-01-05, 01:56 PM
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Banned: Biting
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IP:
LOL
 It was A Nice Piece I Feel you Shouldve said alot more Bcuz this Was Like ...... I Tease But You got potential & talent Two things a whole lotta ppl lack So Nice piece 8/10 ..:: Stanza ::.. |
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04-01-05, 03:05 PM
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IP:
Hmm...
This was an okay drop... could have been alot better.. Structure was okay , alittle off towards the middle.. Concept..was good Wordplay was okay... overall keep it up.. you could have made it longer though... thought it was alittle to short for me... elevate..Hope to see another drop from you ... 7/10
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04-01-05, 03:06 PM
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IP:
iight thanks for the replies guys..i appreciate it..
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Last edited by Origin : 04-01-05 at 03:10 PM. |
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