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"My Hatred" - Feedback Please
IP: 07E0 A9F2
I just wrote this in a half an hour or so, maybe longer, feedback please people,
Yo I got beefs on my hands, I avoid a fight, It seems that im in a tunnel and at the end no light, It seems like I keep running round the track still no end in site, It seems not safe to be out at dark, after light, Cause Im growing older by the day, I wanna keep away from strife, Cause in the time on earth you only get one life, Blow it and you don’t get a sequel, there is no living twice, I try to be myself theres no equal, conducting myself nice, Cause with all this im sick of this unmeaningness, All this nonsensical chat means nothing to me, The hatred I have for these people is incommunicable, Cause if you fuck with me my hate for you is indescribable, I will strike like clockwork precision, I will be Mr. Regularity, To the ones in question I hope its clear this is supposed to be clarity, When it come to you, Im operating intent, Cause you’re a fag, go get bent, Cause in reflection of this situation, I just end up mad, As if Im looking in the mirror and my reflection is screaming back, Cause Ive found out things about you, I know them for a fact, Cause when this is said and done youll be wishing you could turn the time back, In this scenario, Ive been hesitant, paused before replying, Cause if I said I really wanted to have to do shit Id be lying, Im gonna make you screech like a crow, bellow with ache and sufferance, Cause after its done ill be the one having one over, But inside I expect Ill still feel some discomposure, Cause what have you achieved by trying to offend me, Nothing more than just another bitter enemy, Cause the way I feel im will to do whatever, readily, But Im still not about to get caught Im a pro, I operate cleverly, Not like the person in question my foe, who operates sporadically, No prior planning acting on nothing but misjudgement, This verse has been some what of a vent, To spit out my anger and dissent, Cause Ive said it once before go get bent, Feedback please good or bad, ![]() Last edited by Jay Dee : 08-02-02 at 07:55 AM. |
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IP: 07E0 A9F2
The gap in the middle shouldnt be there, I dont know why its done that, tried to alter it but it wouldnt do it,
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good
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i think it was good from what i understood but you jump topic
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Thanks for the feed man, much appreciated,
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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