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Old 04-07-05, 07:25 PM   #1
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Dream or reality?

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in my mind i visualize myself with you i need your touch
in my heart i realize reality without you just aint enough
i just cant imagine me without you my life's purpose is to be about you
i feel you in my sleep; when i'm awake i dream about you
i need to have you i want you bad wuts me without you
your my passion my soul my lungs Dream I cant breathe without you
see i'm not ashamed to express myself and let you know
that i'm complete when we meet and dont wanna let you go
not even hell can stop me from feelin the way i feel
so I'll just Dream and pray and Dream til my Dream's fulfilled
you make me whole you'll take my soul if you go away
but if you do Dream i'm positive you'll be back one day
reality's a bitch baby it's crazy how it takes control
breaks my soul then back comes the dream-it makes me whole
i'm so complete you make me weak when i see you i cant speak
you're unique your mystique brings my feelings to a peak
then you go away again- meant to be or just friends?
real to see or pretend? still my love for you transcends
until you come back again still you're my vitality
yet still there's no finality are you Dream or reality?
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Old 04-07-05, 07:35 PM   #2
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Old 04-07-05, 07:53 PM   #3
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Old 04-07-05, 09:16 PM   #4
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ay wut tha fuck......uppin dis shit
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Old 04-08-05, 03:54 PM   #5
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uppin................
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Old 04-08-05, 04:35 PM   #6
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Old 04-08-05, 04:43 PM   #7
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aight your biggest downfall in my opinion is your VOCABULARY.
dont use you/you/you/do/do/you/.....its very annoyin for readers.
i got ya story line n the point ya were trying to convey...
you lacked on the emotion a bit...but its mainly cause of ya
vocab n lack of descriptional words.....you got the right idea
now just work on producing a imAge to ya reader.....
keep dropping.........pz.....RTF
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