Listening through my stock G4 speaker.

Beat is pretty nice.

First verse - needs a new mic. flow was pretty on, some rush spots, but deliv got monotone by the time the first verse was over. Then the same deliv on the hook. The hook was pretty nice. At some point it goes WAY off beat. Seems liek a paste prob though since it's consistantly too fast for the beat for everything for everything but the last two lines. Second verse's feed is identical to the first. Think with a new mic your mic presense would definitely come up because thee's some characteristic in your voice that your mic's like "nah, fuck em. I ain't doing that". You remind me a little bit of a young 7/3rd. Should have doubled another layer or two of adlibs on the hook. Last Hook finishes way off beat again.

Would have been a pretty solid track if not for thouse rough spots.

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