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04-27-05, 07:36 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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Take 3, Im lookin for ratings as well
IP: ED88 2C9A
Free agent take(3)
I gotta CaL. with a 40 Bus./Shell, when the 40 cuts/Hell, when the shorties run/ Don't it's a homie's trust/You wanna beat me?/You wanna teach me/Don't better speaking dyke language/Because you'll never eat me/I got a new exercise/Rick Simz kinda exercise/Stack pounds, but I don't eat pies/I drop the crack, but I smoke straight dymes/ (I want people to critize this piece)
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04-27-05, 07:42 PM
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IP: 3881 400B
Elevate and work on flow structure and punches....
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04-27-05, 07:45 PM
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Human Crack in The Flesh.
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IP: ED88 2C9A
-Correction-
I gotta CaL. with a 40 Bus./Shell, when the 40 cuts/Hell, when the shorties run/ Don't lie it's a homie's trust/You wanna beat me?/You wanna teach me/Don't bother speaking dyke language/Because you will never eat me/I got a new exercise/Rick Simz kinda exercise/Stack pounds, but I don't eat extra pies/I drop the crack, but I smoke straight dymes/
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