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Old 04-13-05, 09:29 PM   #1
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I am a Nigga

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What I am, is what I was and will always be…A nigga
A nigga with the rage of oppresion etched into the blue print of my soul.
In the age were agression is a synonym of self control
But this is what’s known
First I was “Monkey” and “Savage”, but through time it changed
I went from “Darkey” to “Boy”, to more politically correct names
But through it all the one constant remains the same…
I Am Still A Nigga
I can’t run your governments, your companies, or marry your daughters
But I can shine your shoes and take your orders
And sweep your hallways
But this is the way things have always been…
The color of night describes the skin of my kin
Women and men
Destined for death because black is associated with Sin
But never again because,
Black is beautiful
Being black is beautiful
We my Niggas are beautiful
But our beauty goes unrecognized to the eyes of those who despise our very souls
As to the reasons why we are so loathed,
only God knows…
But no longer is your derogatory language correlated with hatred
Cuz today I’ve flipped the scripts,
And being a nigga to me means something sacred.
Physically fashioned after Jesus himself:
Hair like Sheep’s wool, Skin of burnt polished brass
Ironic, isn’t it?
Your Lord and Savior was an African, I know that provokes your lividness
So that makes him a Nigga too, unless you’re hypocrites?…
I don’t like naming names, but a lot of us have accumulated some fame
Harriet, Fredrick, Booker, Rosa, Madame, Malcolm, Martin
All great people. And were all called the same thing.
And their hardships endured weren’t all in vain
Even though we’re still known as Nigga
Blacks have been and still are essintial assets in the growth and development of the world
….Go Figure
So when I’m called one out of anger I don’t let it shatter my pride
I hold my head high and respond…
“You Damn Right”

Blew it out of the water with this one..props,featured~FLUID
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Old 04-14-05, 01:02 AM   #2
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this is a very in depth drop...alot of emotion.

Your Lord and Savior was an African, I know that provokes your lividness
^^^this line put a smile on my face...such a indepth drop.
a love it...good shit!
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Old 04-14-05, 02:27 PM   #3
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First I was “Monkey” and “Savage”, but through time it changed
I went from “Darkey” to “Boy”, to more politically correct names

omg thats a deep fucking line there sun

Hair like Sheep’s wool, Skin of burnt polished brass
Ironic, isn’t it?
Your Lord and Savior was an African, I know that provokes your lividness
So that makes him a Nigga too, unless you’re hypocrites?…

thats deep as well yo i was really feeling this piece the fucking topic couldnt have been wrote better here the way you touched on the matter was angry yet intelligent something hard to find lately it has a spoken word type form to it vocab is good there is not one bad thing i can say about this it is dope and that is all............
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Old 04-15-05, 02:48 AM   #4
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uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppin this shit is way too dope to go unnoticed
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Old 04-15-05, 10:32 AM   #5
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this was dope shit...good to see some new talent comin back once again...good read dawg keep droppin...=1=
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Old 04-15-05, 12:39 PM   #6
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Damn Thanx fam... funny thing is this poem is about 2 1/2 years old and its the 1st time i've showed it to anyone
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Old 04-15-05, 01:58 PM   #7
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lol wow i love dis!!!!! damn dis was dope fo real tho....a lot of emotion in dis piece; omg!!!!!! u got some mad talent calm u need to hit me up sometime fo a poetry collab or sumin damnnnnnnnnnnnn....lol good drop....1
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Old 04-15-05, 03:55 PM   #8
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jesus wasnt black fools he was israeli he looked like an arab jews have hair like wool jus like blacks do same with some italians and greeks
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Old 04-15-05, 04:09 PM   #9
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i'm not gonna get in to a geographical and biblical debate with you.... either u liked the poem or not... save the other shit for your mental notes
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Old 04-16-05, 01:47 PM   #10
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and i say arise
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Old 04-16-05, 01:54 PM   #11
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edit*
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Old 04-18-05, 02:30 PM   #12
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WOOOOOOOOW!
Yeah, this had alot of emo! Whoa! i found it hard to follow some of the parts but the way you worded this is was dope!
Norm I would say some shit like, up your vocab but who dont need to up that! Like, everything but the structure was on point and I even read this twice.
Dont ever stop and ima' bout to look for your newer shit if this is two and a half years old than Im dieing to see where you are now...
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Old 04-19-05, 02:10 PM   #13
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wow!!! this is reall deep man u showed alot of emoption in this u had some real nice vocab and some real witty lines... if this was written long ago then id love ta see what u bring to the table now... this piece was truyl amazin keep droppin em man pz...
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Old 04-22-05, 11:00 AM   #15
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wow is all I can say. You got my respect yo. dope fuckin' shit pc
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