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05-18-05, 09:22 PM | #1 | |||||||
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Where im from
IP: ABAC 6586
I love baggin my jeans keepin my timbs clean
bang in my black tee slang in my whyte tee. fuk the police fuk show..gangstas got a code (thug life ) fuck da city and jobs hate tht there's niccas out there aint doin shyt lyke da police squad don't hate................................ tht aint it (i just strtd) don't hate me for bein da fact tht I'm gangsta hate da fact thts there roaches in houses hate da fact thts there's faces on milk cartons hate da fact thts there's rats all ova da city and thys just the outside come inside the shell Scared to die cuz I don't wanna go to hell sometimes don't believe in god cuz I live in hell listen I gotta story to tell I live in a place where teens don't know how to spell mutherfucka I live in hell everyday I cry cuz I always hear the sounds of sirens think about all the people thts dyin cuz soldiers stay loyal thier the onlii niccas to trust they come out on the block lyke who want beef who want it wit us corpses pop up anywhere need pickup trucks (oOO shiit) All I'm seein is violence enough to stop the raps see my clique beefin call to know I got there back (cock's gun) link http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191135
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05-19-05, 01:06 AM | #2 | |||||||
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Thought this was solid overall man. Content had some nice quality, was kind of a in-your-face type track. Only thing I didn't like was the flow, seem a bit choppy to me. My suggestion would be to work on that...
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05-19-05, 03:59 PM | #3 | ||||||||
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thnks duke but what u mean choppy and im plannin to use thys when i go to the studio
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05-19-05, 06:40 PM | #4 | |||||||
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IP: 8320 6460
people is sleepin on it!!!!!!!!!!!
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05-19-05, 11:46 PM | #5 | |||||||
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uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^
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05-21-05, 04:00 PM | #6 | |||||||
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come on sonn at least 2pages on commentin
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