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Back for the 1st time
IP: DEFD 64E7
these dope lines grab a hold of ya mind
that dope rhymes i keep rappin bout how cold i can rhyme ( c'mon shine) but wit a nine kid im shootin ya blind point blank ima hit everytime i hope you think that im lyin cuz i done been in this bitch all my life i could make one call tonight you'll get sliced Im just warmin up give me a min
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"and i dont wanna see none of my people hurt or murdered it aint worth it i cant think of a better way to word it then to just say that i love yall to much to reach the verdict so ima walkaway before it goes any further and no dont get it twisted its not a plea that im coppin im just willin to be the bigger man if yall could quit poppin off at the jaws wit the knockin cuz frankly im sick of talkin and im not gonna let someone elses coffin rest on my conscious" Eminem |
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Banned: Cheating
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IP: 2029 97B3
First Of The Concept Wasn't To Good Try To THink Of SOmething Better ,The Flow Was Okay Nothing Special, The Structure Was Fucked Up Fix That Man, No Hate
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B.I.G.
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IP: DD02 1081
not so good, I bet this was ur first OM so no prob.. just elevate wit your structure, use a more extended vocab.. flow was aight, and make your verses a lil larger.
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