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Old 06-03-05, 03:09 PM   #1
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"Story of An Ugly Duckling" ft. Triple_N

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aiight, since Seven got me unbanned from that dumb fuck Doomsday's gayness, I'ma post this track again. Yea, it's old, but it's best track of mine to date. Some diss to this ugly ass hoe at my school i ain't like who madd annoyin'. Trip on hook and intro.

www.myspace.com/spul or www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193731
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193571


I like DOOMSDAY!!!!!!!!!!!, I think if only we had had a chance to get to know each other, perhaps have a drink, then maybe our friendship could have blossomed sooner.
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Old 06-03-05, 03:14 PM   #2
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Intro- was funny as fuck "Slap the hoe.."

Chorus-..lol Triple Nizzle...."Disgusting fat bugaboo as bitch" always coming nice wit it foo

S-..nice presence...u did ya thang am feelin it..haha, "little bitch ran away" but spuly ripped it. "ooh the bitch got a dick" kinda...lol strange..is she transexual..lol?
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Old 06-03-05, 08:28 PM   #3
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^nah, she jus an ugly hoe who think she so fine. :nonono: upppp...........
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Old 06-04-05, 10:25 AM   #4
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lmao good track flows was good i liked tha track came at it witta diff concept bein original trip held it down to fa shos...=1=
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Old 06-04-05, 12:12 PM   #5
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drop the beef. I will strike you. Iight, I really didn't like the beat- that shit was just the same for too long... i like how you hooked up the hook but it was eminemish as fuck- your intro was real funny, lyrics and shit were so,so all in all it was iight, i just think if you worked more on lyrics/delivery you could make a more entertaining solid track... 1
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Old 06-04-05, 04:57 PM   #6
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^^^^ co-sign.... You never really switch up your flow, and its just a monotone spit. Idea was hella eminemish, and I wonder what your mother would say if she heard that track. Hook was different, very commercial, but thats Trip - and it was good to see something different like that. Work on flow and lyrics, not just basic lyrics (rhyming shit with bitch with shit and shit) and lose ya monotone flow. It felt repetative cause you never really switch it up. word.
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Old 06-04-05, 05:12 PM   #7
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^lmao @ what my mother would say. lol yea, she'd be pissed. but yea, thanks for feed. upppppppp..........
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Old 06-05-05, 01:00 PM   #8
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OMG I LOVE THIS TRACK LOL.. The hook is the best part .. lmao.. damn i would have wanted to drop on this.. lol... fun shit.. nice drop/... it was different and i liek it because of that
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Old 06-05-05, 02:28 PM   #9
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^you can get on a remix if you want. weerd.... Ugly Duckling's husband. or w/e lmao. but thanks for feed, yo.....
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Old 06-05-05, 03:15 PM   #10
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yo some funny ass shit lol...especially the intro...really good quality and good lyrics...really dope storytellin and i like how it ended wit the echo...dope shit dawg...8/10
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^word...........................
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Old 06-07-05, 03:52 AM   #12
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yo this shit is pretty dope just dont like your style spul...but even tho your style is kinda sorry to me i like this shit.....if i knew you personally then i would download this...but seems like some earlier eminem shit...

triple is dope with chorus's
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Old 06-07-05, 11:30 AM   #13
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^haha it's all good. thx for feed. uppppppp
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