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Old 06-07-05, 11:19 PM   #1
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LW Title - Young Blaze vs. MarvJay

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Come dope..
 
Old 06-08-05, 10:36 AM   #2
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rookie of da year? lol fuck out here watch ya flow get slaughterd.
blaze drop'd a cd..but 2 "put fire out" he need a "hose & water".
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Old 06-08-05, 10:23 PM   #3
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Marv's Head Cut open brains Look drippy fuck if dis Lame cant hit me Duck.
Look at yah sig cuz i'll bring da`peice to ya hood`like Painted Hippies Truck.
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Old 06-09-05, 10:11 AM   #4
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uuuupppin dis shit....
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Old 06-09-05, 10:48 AM   #5
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marvs was decently worded n was a bit better
young ya shit was long n had filler..
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v/marv
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marv go check into our battle
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 06-09-05, 11:21 AM   #6
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vote- marv
both had equal creativity, but marv's bar was worded as a punch and YB's was worded as a self glorifying line.
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Old 06-09-05, 12:12 PM   #7
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well...

Even tho Marvs verse was worded nice. The concept is madd played.

Gunna have to go with Blaze here, watch your wording tho son, first line was hella hard to read first try but I got the picture, nice drop.

V/YB............
 
Old 06-09-05, 12:14 PM   #8
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vote marv/
less stretched and harder hitting imo.
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v/ YB

Better punch
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Old 06-09-05, 03:35 PM   #10
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v/ marv

decent worplay and wasnt stretched
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Old 06-09-05, 04:53 PM   #11
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Marv I Didn't Fully Understand Yours...but Ok Concept.

Blaze..Just By Reading Yours I Felt Like I Was Gonig Retarded With The Bad Wording..

Vote - Marvjay For Better Overall Punch.

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Old 06-09-05, 06:02 PM   #12
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Vote: Marv

Marv had a little bit of a played concept, but the creativity made up for it... also had a harder punch
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Old 06-09-05, 06:14 PM   #13
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V/YB
Hit Hard Than Marvz!
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Old 06-09-05, 06:44 PM   #14
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yb punch hit real hard here pice/peace to ya hood like painted hippy trucks dope dope dope wordplay there sun marv came decent but the concept he used has been done a million and one times so its getting real old no
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Old 06-09-05, 07:38 PM   #15
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v/ young

...less played
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