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Lay-Text 5 100.00%
Stanza 0 0%
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Old 06-03-05, 11:27 PM   #1
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
Stanza vs Lay-Text

IP: 3240 794D

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Old 06-04-05, 01:06 AM   #2
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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-04-05 01:06 AM.
 
Old 06-04-05, 01:39 AM   #3
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
IP: 3240 794D

Testing Tha Monsta? Nah Fool When It Comes Ta Lyrics My Text Might Hurt
Ya Step On Stage To My Flow & Get Ya Dome Rocced Like Led Zepplin In Concert
The Only Time You ever Lay Text is When You Placed Your bible Down
You dope?.....Looking At His Verse Will Even Make His IP code Frown
We couldnt Find Your Flow Even If We were Playing Marco Polo
Bcuz You Lost The Battle.....Even When The King Went Solo
You Say You Are *Rated R* But all You shit seems so Preschool
You *Restricted* to win Like The projects having a swimming pool
Youve changed Your Name Three Times And Still Yo text has no Elevation
Cuz When Yo Words are Read it Sends Readers To Sleep
Like Church Congregations

*merked* LOL

Goodluck


for those of you who didnt know he has hade a Name change 3 times
from Restrited to Rated R to Lay-Text so You should get the verse basically i filled most of it with Personals LOL
BUt
Explantions Needed?..>pm me
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Old 06-06-05, 03:37 PM   #4
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Old 06-06-05, 05:11 PM   #5
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
IP: 3240 794D

For A MomenT I Thought You was Gonna Duck me Man .....But I Knew you was better than That
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Old 06-08-05, 11:42 AM   #6
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP: D52C 04A2

LoL Nah..I Got This, Been Recording This New Song So I Haven't Even Writen Anything Yet..

I'll Be Sure To Leave A Verse Today.

~R~
 
Old 06-08-05, 11:19 PM   #7
Stanza
Banned: Biting
 
From: NC
IP: 3240 794D

Aii Mayne Do That .....................................
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Old 06-09-05, 03:28 AM   #8
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP: A6AC 0B1C



Look Kid..You Winning This Battle Is Way Too Difficult To Picture..
Like Trying To Develope Flim With Sunlight Exposed To The Mixture..
Seriously This Cats Wack...The Only Time You'll See A Nice Stanza..
Is When Restricted Writes Back...With A Diss In A Poetical Answer..
Fuck..This Pussy Is Straight Up Fake..Just Like Hentai Animations..
and He Couldn't Free-Flow On Me Period..
Even If He Let Waterfalls Fall On Me By Using LeftEyes Ovulations..
I'll Break Stanza Easily...As If I Bashed Him On Frail Health..
and You Would Think He Wrote In Brial Stealth..
Especially Since Nobodys Feeling His Shit Except For Himself..

Do Not Vote Unless You Get The Metaphors and Punches

~R~
 
Old 06-09-05, 03:46 AM   #9
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leave you rest'n pz's
 
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IP: 7A28 7D1E

Voted For: Lay-Text

Look Kid..You Winning This Battle Is Way Too Difficult To Picture..
Like Trying To Develope Flim With Sunlight Exposed To The Mixture..
^^nice opener,connected.......
Seriously This Cats Wack...The Only Time You'll See A Nice Stanza..
Is When Restricted Writes Back...With A Diss In A Poetical Answer..
^^ohh damn, nice personal
Fuck..This Pussy Is Straight Up Fake..Just Like Hentai Animations..
and He Couldn't Free-Flow On Me Period..
Even If He Let Waterfalls Fall On Me By Using LeftEyes Ovulations..
^^stretched but nice n complex
I'll Break Stanza Easily...As If I Bashed Him On Frail Health..
and You Would Think He Wrote In Brial Stealth..
Especially Since Nobodys Feeling His Shit Except For Himself..
^^got it but, feeling himself is kinda played
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hell you had 2 dope punches n the rest were ok, but this was a solid diss, n you stayed consistent after you dropped dopeness in ya 1st n 2nd bars..nice drop
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Testing Tha Monsta? Nah Fool When It Comes Ta Lyrics My Text Might Hurt
Ya Step On Stage To My Flow & Get Ya Dome Rocced Like Led Zepplin In Concert
^^self glorifing opener, bad start
The Only Time You ever Lay Text is When You Placed Your bible Down
You dope?.....Looking At His Verse Will Even Make His IP code Frown
^^wack
We couldnt Find Your Flow Even If We were Playing Marco Polo
Bcuz You Lost The Battle.....Even When The King Went Solo
^^wack
You Say You Are *Rated R* But all You shit seems so Preschool
You *Restricted* to win Like The projects having a swimming pool
^^makes no sense...really it doesnt
Youve changed Your Name Three Times And Still Yo text has no Elevation
Cuz When Yo Words are Read it Sends Readers To Sleep

Like Church Congregations
^^forced ryhme but decent.
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you didnt have a good verse here...no real hard
hitting punches, weak statements, blah at your verse..
elevate......
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i'll play on ya consience, ya contents is complete nonsense
speak of biting, then you fucks flip everyone of my damn concepts
what the fuck, was you high..?
did you think i wouldn't recognize lines that i made
then you come up some bullshit tryna prove that im gay...!
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fake fucks..move on...!
 
Old 06-09-05, 01:34 PM   #10
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP: E283 EC9E



Uppin This Muphucka..

~R~
 
Old 06-09-05, 03:22 PM   #11
Ancel
God is a Fable.
 
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IP: 02F7 095B

Voted For: Lay-Text

Meh dont need to vote becasue stanza is banned for biting and if that happens the people he was battling automatically get a win

fucker
 
Old 06-09-05, 05:33 PM   #12
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
IP: E5EB 11E6



Uppin This Muphucking Battle.

~R~
 
Old 06-10-05, 01:26 AM   #13
Ryan Hughes
the real man of steel
 
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From: Jerzy
IP: 58E6 C588

Voted For: Lay-Text

V/R...this was actually a good battle both came wit good verse's....but ima have to say r came wit some creative punchs that were consistent an none played good meta's an wordplay......Stanza u came wit some good shit to u came at him wit some good lines an personals...but u came wit some played lines....like the project simmin heard it mad times....No Hate Jus work on that.......V/R-Rated.....RETURN THE FAVOR Or i'll get this vote removed.....
Opener=R
CLoser=S
Punchs=R
Structure=Tie
Meta's=R
Wordplay=Tie
Vocab=Tie
multi's=None really
personals=Tie
Overall=R-Rated
http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=194262
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