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GoD LiKe
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Im Imprisoned, this dull staggering night
A hallway dimly lit by my failures Swallowing a thorn, piercing my arm with agony Begging for me to walk unknowingly A bitter smile, shooting up with endless ecstasy Faith....Stay with me tonight I scream Trembling fingers grasp the lid Awaiting the sensation desperately Devouring my control slowly Go away I beg of you, run Run to your paradise without me Sleep is scattering up a ladder of rejection Floating towards misery that loves company but prefers candlelight dates and singing prostitutes Shooting up with endless ecstasy Edge of insanity, please insert it in my arm Don't abandon me Like the father who left me in the birth of winter Like the dream that ran away with a smirk Like these pills that release me from those relationships Where's my needle, please Go away I beg of you, run Inject it, inject it into my heart and cleanse my abuse Swallowing a thorn, let the roots emerge into my depression Run to my paradise with me if you dare
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I like the metaphors in this piece..you seem to know the exact false truths addiction can bring on a person, this showed great emotion and your words are always perfect for the concept you bring forth into your poems. Dope poem, keep em coming.1
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Apollyon
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hot long time no see
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GoD LiKe
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IP: 49AE C6DF
thanks for the feeed
and typ whats up mayne
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