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Old 06-22-05, 01:19 PM   #1
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GOTTA MAKE IT ( AUDIO) leave somethin

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GOTTA MAKE IT

hit da link
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/broyao_music.htm

tell me what yall think and shyt

holla back at me

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Old 06-22-05, 01:20 PM   #2
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Old 06-22-05, 01:53 PM   #3
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ummm...

i can barely understand you...flow is off its very choppy....there is like no delivery....it osunds like ya reading of a piece of paper.

hook-isnt catchy or good at all

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Old 06-22-05, 04:35 PM   #4
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...im rhymin to da snare drum, if you listen closely, there is a rhyme every snare

but ima check ya shyt out
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Old 06-22-05, 05:01 PM   #5
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god damn be..this shit sounds horrible ..you on beat but you sound horrible son..no mic presence what so ever...change up that wack ass emotion you tryna come wit shit sounds like you cryin...and as if you talkin slow minded...damn...keep practicin writin befoer you spit kid...1ne.
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Old 06-22-05, 06:31 PM   #6
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cryin, what da fuck? aigh whateva yo, do you
yea i spit it slow, but i made a couple otha songs, where i spit it quick
mayb ill drop that shyt, probabl not tho

holla dog
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Old 06-22-05, 09:51 PM   #7
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listening:
Beat is dope...voice sounds fucking weird...wheres the flow...damn u sound weird...is that ur real voice?...what beat is this...cuz its dope as fuck...lyrics are wack...no hate but elevate
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Old 06-22-05, 10:13 PM   #8
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i cut my last verse out, which was probabl da sickest, but its whateva,
yea i got that much bass in my voice dog

da beat is live by da gun, by tony yayo
yea da shyt is heat
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Old 06-22-05, 11:16 PM   #9
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Old 06-23-05, 03:15 PM   #10
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aigh yo, jus tryna see da reasonin, ya know what i mean
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