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Old 06-19-05, 01:42 PM   #1
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It's always them broke niggas that wanna smoke witcha
them ex cain slangers....turn coke sniffas
me, i roll a swisher the size of boa constrictors
in the club holdin my liquor, posin for pictures
foes they won't approach, they know my flow is elixir
in any zip code you know we flip O's quicker
rip shows, get hoes, my chips grow bigger
but for the team, my Family Matters like them Winslow niggas
but i won't even trip...can't stand a shit talkin...
cripwalkin nigga....when he ain't even a crip
yeah he spit but i ain't believin anything leavin his lips
he a snake and i don't need to get bit to see that shit
but if its really that real and you wnat a piece of this
meet me at the pizza pit, one on one well see who quit
infinite i ain't ever lost my focus......and please
don't get to close to me dawg im clausterphobic
this is the realest shit, you would think that Pac wrote it
but these lines ain't mine, i shine divine cause God spoke it!
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Old 06-19-05, 02:45 PM   #2
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...........THIS FLOWED NICELY.. THE LAST LINE WOZ WHT RELLI CAPTIVATED ME IT STOOD OUT MOST FOR ME OVERALL YEH THIS IS REAL NICE.. IS A SHAME IS REAL SHORT... CUD B SLIGHTLY LONGA

WUS GUD....... LIKE IT ... IT FLOWED NICELY AN IT WAS ALSO VERY CREATIV THE CONCEPT WAS GOOD AN CHOICE/USE OF WORDS WAS ALSO GUD AS IT PORTRAYED EMOTIONS NICELY.. HOWEVER IT WUD B NICE IF THIS WER LONGER.. OVERALL RELLI GUD........ KEEP DROPPIN FIRE ~1~


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this is the realest ####, you would think that Pac wrote it
but these lines ain't mine, i shine divine cause God spoke it!
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Old 06-19-05, 02:48 PM   #3
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Wus Gud....... Like It ... It Flowed Nicely An It Was Also Very Creativ The Concept Was Good An Choice/use Of Words Was Also Gud As It Portrayed Emotions Nicely.. However It Wud B Nice If This Wer Longer.. Overall Relli Gud........ Keep Droppin Fire ~1~ <------ Dis Got Pasted In Accidently Frm Anotha Response I Written........ Inna Rush

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Old 06-19-05, 08:20 PM   #5
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wrd good drop nice flow vocab and structure return tha favour on my new open mic
overall 7/10 keep it up dogg
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