Hip Hop College

See,what we need is a hip hop college,ta share our knowledge
It could be co-ed, co-race,whites and blacks held in hostage
Where we learn:to write,what's not right bout tha game & what is
Profesors like Talib,showin how we can talk about life,not watches
After class passing dutches, while we laugh and spit hella rhymes
At the same time, scholars in class,helpin others-develop weak lines
Beats will mark the ends of break times, scott storch, neptunes&dre
Cause we gonna need da doctor after freestyle battles in da hall way
Not to mention, detention!?locked up writing cyphers along with shine
But we worn't mind, cause nerds'll get ta learn about a life ah crime
And lunchtime, we'll be drinking punches and serving beet ends(beat'n's)
This college would have to be AC'd, no tellin when this mass heat ends
And other schools, just can't bombard, we got shug-night as the guard
Lil John da janitor, his flow is nasty,plus need not mention his vocab
"yeaah" all we need is a few pens and pads, and we'll be "Oh...kay!!"
The drama and music bands?shit,that's sure 2b runned by Puff Da-ddy
The schools hall of fame, will be biggie and pac upon a platinum plaque
Every morn we'd have assembly,pouring liquor 4da other dead cats!!


and i reviewed mad threads on this site yesterday!!!

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i really like this.. really nice concept..i was actually picturing this place in my mind.. maybe elevate your rhyme scheme a bit but other than that, this was a very good drop..

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I also liked this piece, It was pretty creative,Yah flow was on point for the most part. i laughed at a few parts.. lol, But Good Drop Hommie.

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fuck you

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that's what open mic should be about- Creativity.
thanx for the feedback, it's much appreciated!

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