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Old 06-20-05, 12:26 AM   #1
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deception lingers dont fall into there trap
pay attention to this revelation we gota re-act/
to these politcians cause they wont listen
so its my mission decison to see a calmer condition/
of this world wich is in a position of division
we all sepreate we cant subside or divide/
we need to come together, Amercia unite
bring back the respect to the stars and stripes/
rebel against the fuckin president
right now fight now dont be hesitant/
cause at any moment there could be a draft
then ya could be there with an AK in iraq/
diein for a pointless for his greed
bush face the heat girt ya teeth/
be a man and apolige to the people
cause ya whole campigan was dectiful/
ya full of lies you must die your resbonsible
it at all posible stop the war no more/
bull shit reason its treason so can ya think
what’ll happen when the draft papers is inked/
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Old 06-20-05, 02:01 AM   #3
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Old 06-20-05, 02:47 AM   #4
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uppin thanks for the feed back man keep it comeing..........
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Old 06-20-05, 04:01 AM   #5
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yeah this was cool only because there was so much truth in it.......

...although some of ur lines were uneven in places i sitll liked it.......i would give it a 7



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Old 06-20-05, 04:04 AM   #6
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thanks for the feec back man.....ill RTF tomorow im tired and i dont wanna give u some basic feed back...
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Old 06-20-05, 04:33 AM   #7
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its cool dont trip.................
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Old 06-20-05, 09:51 AM   #8
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Nice shyt i feel ya homie!Keep it up!)Overall 7/10(
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Old 06-20-05, 08:29 PM   #9
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thanks for the feedback...uppin...................
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Old 06-20-05, 08:38 PM   #10
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concepts played! Everybody has approached this concept at the same angle
i.e An angry citizen tryna start a revolution,pssh..try being more creative
On the other hand, ya flow was decent, had few nice mutli's and lyrics.
5/10..played concept..i seen that bout 100+ times...sorry
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Old 06-21-05, 03:04 AM   #11
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bitch fuck u...u fuckin newb battle me u punk...im gonna get at J.terror u fuckin with a vet u god damn newb bye bitch bye
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Old 06-21-05, 03:09 AM   #12
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Old 06-21-05, 03:42 AM   #13
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whar the fuck does that mean...
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Old 06-21-05, 03:56 AM   #14
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uppin..........................................
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Old 06-23-05, 02:33 AM   #15
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uppin.............................................
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