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Check in by: 06-14-05 at 08:29 PM

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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 07:41 AM.

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-10-05 10:00 AM.

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193456
^Plz click the link

Check it.....EZ..

Last man standin? i'm suprized, when u gon Realize ur completly Dispized!..
ur ''beefs not authentiq''...u cant even ''see-me''..Maybe open ur Eyez?*
U Tried, called me a snake? why? cuz i'm ''all up in u'' Like Grass**
talkin lyric on lyric, Im-Up-In-It, NO not ur fantasy ov ''takin it in da Ass''
Fag..U culdnt even Pass ''THC'z'' takin da Class onna High
Kyd ..when I RIP U & Lyrikally Kill
.....................no need 2 look 2 da sky, nobody died, CHILL..
Diz da aftermath, U Throw shit @ me?..I'll Wrap u inna Diaper
Saw yo open mic diss, even ur fellow Countrymen Dont Lyke-Ya***
call me da snyper, explorin n Jackin, its skill u evidently lackin
live inna dream world, collectin A4 paper, thinkin ur ''Stackin''
rate our bars 2 cars, i'm old skool-dodge viper, ur a family sized Rover
=ITZ OVER=
I'm livin Proofif u wanna shoot, it'll be da same outcome az ''Toy 'Souljah''***
Find four leaf clover, head 4 da rainbow, taste it, cuz u need LUCK
yo' rhymes are lyke skittles, Unoriginal wit 1 flava dat u obviously Suck
dumb fuck..
u aint throwin a punch, lyke a cat-fight, u more or less Slap
next tyme u talk ''fish shit'', keep ya ''lips closed'' lyke a Nun's Flaps!

*&**=read da link provided & it shuld make sense
***=he dissed me in open mic & 2 british pplz told him it wuz whack az fuck wit no ''punches'' [which iz in relation 2 da 1st line in da closer]
****=da video toy soldier, proof gets shot lol & hiz name iz souljah & he has a gun in hiz avatar

Good luck souljah & if u dont undestand any personmalz plz pm me b4 u vote

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Dis is hard to contemplate...i don't quite understand,
Why dis 8th grader's tryna fuck wid a real man,
At the start i thought he was a big man tryna test,
Turns out he's still suckin milk out his mum's breast,
That does explain why he can't spell his name right,
Or understand the bigger words i dropped in open mic,
Kid you spit more shite than the contents of your diaper,
Yo i'll put an end to you like Kennedy's sniper
Yo blunt pocket knife flows are never gonna cut deep,
The only ones who feel you, got your dick between their butt cheeks,
You condone them niggas' dickridin, you fuck g's,
If you ain't have them niggas to depend on you'd be stuck g...

voteeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee eeee

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Easy battle...

Punches: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Personals: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Wordplay: KhAoZ ThEoRy
Structure/Flow: Soulja
Multies: none

Overall winner: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Easy battle

Hit up my battle with Ghost or this vote will be removed

Thanx

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Ghost iz mah krew so i cant but scream@me wita diffrent link & i can return da favor

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

Dis is hard to contemplate...i don't quite understand,
Why dis 8th grader's tryna fuck wid a real man,
^^seemed to glorify..not a real punch
At the start i thought he was a big man tryna test,
Turns out he's still suckin milk out his mum's breast,
^^u said he 8th. grade..now a baby?
That does explain why he can't spell his name right,
Or understand the bigger words i dropped in open mic,
^^get some wordplay or metas
Kid you spit more shite than the contents of your diaper,
Yo i'll put an end to you like Kennedy's sniper
^^1st line was nice but 2nd sucked
Yo blunt pocket knife flows are never gonna cut deep,
The only ones who feel you, got your dick between their butt cheeks,
^^suks...ya got a link proving he got d/r?Or are u makin fake personals
You condone them niggas' dickridin, you fuck g's,
If you ain't have them niggas to depend on you'd be stuck g...
^^terrible closer

I don't have to bother reviewing Khoaz theory's verse because it was good.Souljah...wat are talin bout he got dickriders?Give a link or explanation justifing that.U can't just say he got dickriders unless ya got proof.Neva put fake personals.

Vote-Theory

OK then for example in his battle against confidential i couldn't help but notice a one or two votes for Khaoz Theory with bullshit explanations. What blatantly happened iz that they saw his battle stats and probably thought it wouldn't hurt to have someone like him on their side and so threw together the lamest explanations together...which if you used in battles these days would be disqualified for inadequate feedback.No hate to Khaoz Theory at all but just check the link:

http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=192417

lol souljah, stop complaining, theres not a person on rapverse who wuld say u beat me in diz battle.

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Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

ok no need to an explanayion coz khaoz took this eazy....

khaoz... u had some good lines in there wordplay was there u just need to word your punches better... fix up your structure and then you will be on your way... some of your lines i didn't get becuz they were werded kinda weird but the rest of em were ok.. good drop fam...

souljah: ight man u need to elevate alot... think of good concepts for punches, word then good and go for some wordplay ur spitting too basic which will give you the loss.... you are ok for a beginner just keep battleing and you will find your style get me?

ok v/ khaoz for having bwetter wordplay punches and a more enjoyable verse... pz rtf links in the sig

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