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Wes City 5 83.33%
Da Mahnster 1 16.67%
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Old 07-21-05, 07:48 PM   #1
Da Mahnster
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Da Mahnster vs Wes City

IP: 841E F38E

Battle Rules:

4 Barz
No Recycling
No Biting
Due in 30 minz.
Blind Spitz

Duece

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 08:18 PM

Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in.
 
Old 07-21-05, 07:49 PM   #2
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Da Mahnster has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:49 PM.
 
Old 07-21-05, 07:57 PM   #3
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Wes City has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:57 PM.
 
Old 07-21-05, 08:05 PM   #4
Wes City
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IP: FEFC E273

Ya lines are pre-school kid, im the one to haunt ya
Cause after 3rd grade no ones been afraid of monstahs
Give it up your not gangsta bitch, so jus stop-be
I know for a fact Mis-spelling is not a thug hobbie
Im known to murder kids, while you just known as a bore
Ill Drown you in a lake and leave ya ass dead for shore
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Old 07-21-05, 08:08 PM   #5
Da Mahnster
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I'd have to perform a sayonce to "See-ya-Post" might as well dissapear cuz u "DROPP'N GHOST"//
cant 'beat-me' to get this "SEA-MEN-CLOSE" u aint a rapper, just "Dreaming-Shows"//

you best 'choke' like you "Toung-Tied" Ya rhymes arent hot if shit "Sun-Fried"//
Why you STUNT GUY?? now u best RETIRE and finish liek "DA-Alumni"//(Only skilless)

your "Barz-show" you spinning out more than "Car-showz" CITY?? u aint "LARGE BRO"//
You finished...i aint coming "HARD-THO"...for you today would be a "SMART CHOKE"//

Cant Graduate-Here , I Saturate-ears, Wes 'cant pass flow', he don't PUMP-NO-FEAR//
214 postz 0 Winz!! ...u better "UP FOR YEARZ",dont " Pump no Tearz" not 1 bar from u gon "PUMP NO CHEERS"//
 
Old 07-21-05, 08:08 PM   #6
Wes City
in your e-dreams
 
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ya rhymes are horrible im one to throw fists
his lines arent wack....there garabge or shit

shit my last bar got cut off.....ah well dont dq me on some gay shit
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Old 07-21-05, 08:15 PM   #7
Da Mahnster
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naw...no DQ....buut...u need to work man. i came easy...and it looks like a win for me, but goodlooks.... keep it up
 
Old 07-21-05, 09:16 PM   #8
Wes City
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lmao your structure is horrible and your punches are weak and played...its an easy win for me
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Old 07-21-05, 09:21 PM   #9
B. Magik
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Voted For: Wes City

Im pretty 100% Da Mahnster bit his verse

Plus, all his personals were fake, didnt have any punches, and the multies kinda sucked.

New Method has picked up another easy win.
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Old 07-21-05, 09:29 PM   #10
Da Mahnster
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wtf......i bit my verse?? ahaha....are u insane... and how are the personals fake??? ...wwwwwwoooooowww im smelling dickride 100%.....
 
Old 07-21-05, 09:30 PM   #11
Sean Gunner
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Voted For: Wes City

Da Mahnster
I'd have to perform a sayonce to "See-ya-Post" might as well dissapear cuz u "DROPP'N GHOST"//
cant 'beat-me' to get this "SEA-MEN-CLOSE" u aint a rapper, just "Dreaming-Shows"//
Another double bar style. Blah wordplay and ok punch.
you best 'choke' like you "Toung-Tied" Ya rhymes arent hot if shit "Sun-Fried"//
Why you STUNT GUY?? now u best RETIRE and finish liek "DA-Alumni"//(Only skilless)
No. Bad punch.
your "Barz-show" you spinning out more than "Car-showz" CITY?? u aint "LARGE BRO"//
You finished...i aint coming "HARD-THO"...for you today would be a "SMART CHOKE"//
Self glorification, ok attempt at a personal.
Cant Graduate-Here , I Saturate-ears, Wes 'cant pass flow', he don't PUMP-NO-FEAR//
214 postz 0 Winz!! ...u better "UP FOR YEARZ",dont " Pump no Tearz" not 1 bar from u gon "PUMP NO CHEERS"//
Wordplay is getting old. Overall bad punch and bad attempt at a personal.

Overall, you are trying to win on wordplay and no real punches. Only 2 personal attempts, both failed. Work on forming real punches and not just wordplay.

Wes City
Ya lines are pre-school kid, im the one to haunt ya
Cause after 3rd grade no ones been afraid of monstahs
Hint of self glorification, but nice personal in the 2nd line.
Give it up your not gangsta bitch, so jus stop-be
I know for a fact Mis-spelling is not a thug hobbie
Eh, wasn't feeling this punch.
Im known to murder kids, while you just known as a bore
Ill Drown you in a lake and leave ya ass dead for shore
Blah wordplay, and hint of self glorification again.

Overall, your personal won it for you mostly. Cuz at least the few punches you had hit somewhat. Bit of self glorification though so be sure to check that.

My vote goes to Wes City cuz of his punches and personals. Though he didn't have as many, his hit harder then da mahnsta's wordplay attempts.

v- Wes City
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Old 07-21-05, 09:32 PM   #12
Sean Gunner
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Da Mahnster
how are the personals fake???


Well, for one thing Wes City has 4 wins, not zero.
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^^I think this explains my view on gangster rap perfectly.
 
Old 07-21-05, 09:41 PM   #14
B. Magik
Sam Dope
 
From: STL
IP: 1CA5 73AB

Quote:
Originally Posted by Da Mahnster
wtf......i bit my verse?? ahaha....are u insane... and how are the personals fake??? ...wwwwwwoooooowww im smelling dickride 100%.....



Personals are fake because:

He has 4 wins, not 0, and he had more posts at the time then what you claimed. Fake personals like that lead to biting suspitions anyways, but Ive also seen that exact verse on another site a while back, I just dont remember whice one

Lol at me riding New Method...

Thats what the Revelation is for
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Old 07-21-05, 10:20 PM   #15
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This was feedback posted for Wes City

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VOTE DA MAHNSTER:: More complex everything, creative
good drop ina short amount of time, decent personal attempts considering.
 
 


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