I know it sounds more like a poem, but anyways.....


Oh Lord God, You are number One and Supreme
You have created everything and are the King
I see many people on this sight called Rap Verse
But all they seem to want to do is diss and curse
I’m on here to proclaim Your ever-loving grace
Do Your will, but getting nothing but disgraced
A lot of people on here wantin to start fights
How can I make them open their eyes and see the light
Lord, I pray that You will show them what’s true
Guide them, lead them, bring them straight to You
Let love take the place of all the hate in their hearts
Show them Your promise that You’ll never ever part
And help me to be the witness You need me to be
So I can show them Your side of eternity
So Lord, again please help these people on RV
Show them Your love that will last for eternity





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Good rhyming and flow, ppl need to take this to heart. 9/10 boy, that's a start hehe

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3 nails + 1 cross = 4given
No matter how good you are there's always someone better.
I'm not the status quo stereotype you want me to be.

good work here ma i like it very creative, vocab was on point, good topic & different den tha rest keep writing

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Aight.. I like your Idea, but yah gotta spend more time on it, and Upp your Vocab.. Structure was good, and it flowed Aight..Overall it was not that good but not that bad.. Just Keep at it Bro.. yall Get it..

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fuck you

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I agree^ for the most part

keep the faith, I like people who are true to themselves

spread the word of god, if it is what you believe

you got a fan right here homie

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B dot Ones

3ive Crew

text record (tb) 21 - 6

audio record (tb) 4 - 1

thanks y'all, i just did this in a matter of a few minutes so that's why its kinda short, but anyways............uppin.................

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uppin................

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alright... you got simple rhymes going on... so message... 10/10... good to see christian rappers tryin' to get their message out... but as far as lyrical wise... 4/10.

BTW... where in the bootheel are you from... I'm from the complete opposite corner... Lawson, MO it's inbetween Richmond, KC, & St. Joe...

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thanks man, i'm from caruthersville, right in the corner by TN and AR.......................................uppin.... .......................

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Yeah... for some reason I thought you were from Caruthersville... no idea why...

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lol ^........uppin this

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