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Check in by: 08-05-05 at 03:54 PM

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PhreeNapdizzle has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 03:26 PM.

I gotta rap my ass out to pass this animal actin..
who has last place trophies of brass for. stam-ina lackin/
.. they call him taz and its gotta be for a reason..
he probly thinks hes crazy or insane. but hes just teasin'/
hes actual-ly quite pleasin'.. i guess hes more like bugz'..
but this aint bunny season, or id go and cock' my guns/
How can you rap, if you slur.. your.. voca-bu-lary..
that makes u extra spooky, you turned into a fag whos scary/
the atmosphere-hes probly used to's underground hed lose you..
but if hes missin food he'll spin and spin till he'd accuse you/
You suck taz-manian devil....
ill fuckin pop! you till you SPAZ sane-again fuck-in Rebel!


Explanations (If needed):

lines 1 and 2 - its saying i gotta really try to pass this animal actin (cuz taz is an animal.. and "he" acts in cartoons).. his trophies arent gold cuz hes in last place.. so theyre brass cuz he cant stay in the battle long enough (stamina lackin)

lines 3 and 4 - in the cartoons taz goes outa control.. but its an act (hes just teasin)

lines 5 and 6 - in real-ality.. hes not mean at all, hes more like bugz bunny.. but its not bunny season or else id load my guns and go rabbit hunting)

lines 7 and 8 - taz manian devil cant talk.. he just mumbles n slurs his speech.. and often times fags slur there speech too, soo..

lines 9 and 10 - he gets mad when theres no food.. so he would spin.. but wouldnt do anything else other than accuse you for taking it

lines 11 and 12 - im just saying id pop him so he spaz's out so much that he turns sane again.

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taz has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-05-05 03:28 PM.

Im back with a vengeance, and motives of attacking this gimmick/
your flow nice but what it's lacking is sickness,& in fact it is missing/
so you see your lines would be ill if you had attached them syphilis/
im slapping ya senseless, cause you need more practice with written/
all you do is follow so how can you be leading a factions of bitches/
so before you claim Taz isn't gifted, make sure ya actions is vicious/
cuz everyone know ya punches is soft like you clashing with mittens/
i'm destroying your passive intentions, simply by smashing ya sentence/
cuz you claim ya flow dope but we all know for a fact that it isn't/
it's seems ya lacking consistence, while i stay on track when i rip this/
so if you're the best then why in the nominations ya ass isn't mention/
im tired of matches wit bitches, acting like they rapping wit sickness/
my rap is proficient, so you see it's more than just having precision/
man i wouldn't read ya raps if i was inside of a fabric convention/
i bet now i have ya attention, should’ve took time to study my work/
put ya dick to the screen all you want ya still can’t fuck with my verse/
bitch you suck and what’s worse, you act like your flows is too sick/
but you couldn’t hang with my punches if you tied a rope to my fist/
it’s hopeless so quit, for some reason im sensing hate from this cat/
he hooked on phonics but skill isn't what we can de bait with this fag/
even his punches is so played I could easily anticipate his attack/
you got a government flow but I’d still senate it straight to the trash/
how can you say that im wack, when ya rank is two places from last/
ya don't know who ya messing with, but trust me i’ll wreck ya shit/
cause you couldn't be the real deal even if the deck was fixed/
ripping you is effortless, and it looks like ya on the brink of demise/
eyelash out at you…and your career is over in the blink of a eye/
ya thinking ya nice, claming you was gonna finish me, is you kidding b?/
dawg i'll viscously, rip ya ridicously, regardless of what the bar limit be/
you can’t get rid of me, you need to know that divine is forever bolder/
and you couldn’t win over EVIL playing chess on the devil’s shoulder/

uppin for votes people dont leave me hanging...........

uppin for votes G/L phreenapdizzle nice battle............

nice verse taz.. much better than i honestly expected.. only thing about it is u use some words too much.. and u jump ur thoughts.. other than that.. u got some nice punches and good rhyming

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VS. AITZ

thanks, i liked ur verse a lot lol u dissed taz.....upset me lol

Voted For: taz

Flow - Taz, ur flow was better becuz the nice structure, Phree urs was lacking good structure

Punches -Taz....better-punches-nice-metas and such...Phree u had some nice ones too but-didnt cut it-

Personals - Phree actualy had better personals towards taz, taz u lacked them.BUT PHREE you shouldnt have to explain ur personalsl

Multies - Obviously-Taz by his type of rhyme scheme, his rhyme scheme almost always guarantees him flow and multies. Phree had some multis too but once again Taz had more effective ones

Originality - Taz ur lines were fresh i liked them not bad at all.....Phree u had some knowledge about the taz manian devil...but couldnt cut it as u can see

with that being said, v/taz

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Voted For: taz

woooooooo.....damn.....LoL...

at Taz's 100 lines vs the other guy's 12

Taz used better vocab and shit.But he lacked the dope wordplay and metas.But he had nice multis.
THe other guy had lines that were basic and corny.Phree...next time I suggest you don't explainan and use metas and such

ONe sided for more lines
Vote-Taz
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203195

much appreciated^^......still uppin for votes

Voted For: taz

Wow lol, this is tko by taz.....lol like a million lines to 6....but regardless taz had better multis, better vocab....little overdose on the word usage......but sick structure which made it flow tight.....phree, ur verse was iight but u described him more than u dissed him....u have a lot of knowledge for the taz lol.....yea v/taz