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08-26-05, 06:37 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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I Promse By G.Y.T. (Gods Young Talent)---A single by Me n my Hommmie Vibe..
IP: 6680 E402
links at bottom link to music: www.soundclick.com/dabatos This is a single from G.Y.T.'s CD "Music For The Soul" G.Y.T. (G.ods Y.oung T.alent) which is me n vibe.. 1st verse vibe. chorus: Me 2nd Verse Me Chorus Lyrics: [Verse]:[1] - Vibe - baby girl, i love your smile, beautiful eyes drive my wild you the type to have my child, ya nice thighs drive me wild doesnt matter how you dress.. my affection is still off the charts, just listen to the pounds in my chest i found the best, you're the girl of my dreams thinkin bout you even as i twirl in my sleep ill make a mural to my queen, my one of a kind love im lovin the way i feel your tight hugs when the nights done and if i was, able to see you every chance i would be sure to be there every chance i could i should, stop wastin time, and ask you now when you need me to help you up cause the fact you down ill be there, rely on that, rely on facts that i always love your hugs, everytime in fact i shouldnt have to tell you that you are perfect for me us two spirits up roamin heaven eternally Chorus: i promise... ill always be there for you i promise... I will always care for you i promise... That I'll always charrish you.. you are the only girl for me, that I promise you.. Verse 2: Dabatos I really cant explain what i feel in acouple of words.. But i know what i feel, is like flyin with the birds... What we have is worth it, and baby girl your so perfect.. And i just know that we ment to me, baby girl its our purpose.. To be together forever, baby whenever I am down.. You were the only lady to make me reverse that frown.. You forgave me baby for wut I done, i dont know how.. But i know that in my life, i've never felt so proud.. For the one i truly love, and the air that I breathe... My future wife, and always been there whenever in need I know im right, that she's the one, I know its she.. Like an angel her skin's as smooth as the oceans breeze... In her arms, never felt so much like home to me.. I guess my dream came true, cuz she's my hope n dream.. Baby girl, i really wish that you grow old with me.. I promise i'll give back to you of what you've shown to me.. Chorus i promise... ill always be there for you i promise... I will always care for you i promise... That I'll always charrish you.. you are the only girl for me, that I promise you.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=204756 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205666
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08-26-05, 08:53 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6680 E402
up up up up and awaaaaaaay
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08-27-05, 02:34 PM
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Whys That?
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IP: 5285 DC82
Listening.....
beat nice... deep soundingshit right off the bat. singing is ok,emotion is deep. Quality is good. hook is nice. You allways singing about bitches huh..oops I mean your girl.. This track is ok, Im talking to you on aim now so I played it a couple of times, at first i didnt find it up to that level of industry standard,but after hearing it a couple oif times it becomes kinda catchy. What i would focus on is your approach,at times our some what mumbling, not strong,just not pronouncing your words 100% clear. apart from that this tracks all good. |
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08-27-05, 02:39 PM
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Don't Even Think About It
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IP: B6A7 7A3B
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First dude sucks...Flow is terrible, sounds like he's just reading...Bad mic presence...Hook is good...Is this you singing Dabatoes? You're not bad...Second verse is much better...flow is pretty good, falls off a little... Overall, 6/10
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08-27-05, 03:04 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6680 E402
lol word thanx fam for the feed.. n yea thats me singing lol
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08-27-05, 05:27 PM
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Artist, that simple
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IP: 4B4B 542E
beat is an ok choice....
vibe - his flow was off at the beginning, and it seemed that you was forcing more words then needed, but you corrected overtime. Vocab is decent, and storyline also. Dabato - turn the volume up on the chorus a little, cause you could barely hear it at the beginning. Your flow was ok, but great storyline and delivery. Vocab was decent. Overall, decent track. 7.3/10
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08-27-05, 07:18 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6680 E402
word thanx for the feed fam.... i really appreciate it
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08-27-05, 11:55 PM
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C.hristopher S.ean D.abatos
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IP: 6680 E402
uppin.................
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