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MC:Philosopher | 5 | 83.33% | |
STAY FOCUS | 1 | 16.67% | |
Voters: 6. You may not vote on this poll |
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07-09-05, 08:04 PM | #1 |
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STAY FOCUS vs MC:Philosopher
IP: E31E 5CBB
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07-09-05, 08:06 PM | #2 | |
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IP: E31E 5CBB
STAY FOCUS has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 08:06 PM.
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07-09-05, 08:19 PM | #3 |
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IP: E31E 5CBB
Yo check it . .
Battling me is like a "orthodontist" visit, so boy "brace" urself cat i spit hot fire get ready to be melt/ Even if this dog got a masters at "art" of "freestyling" @ Harvard University/ he wouldn't be know as a "Philosopher/ MC"/ "Clean" ur lines up if you wanna go far/ If you looking for good "soap" you've got to raise the "bar"/ I bet when they read ur verse its gonna be like thirsty jokers saying wheres the pucnch line/ cat give up u can't ryme/ cat i fucked u up and gave you a "limped" and don't try to pull out a "lame" excuse/ Its over i won this battle end of u
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07-09-05, 08:31 PM | #4 | |
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IP: E3B2 691B
MC:Philosopher has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-09-05 08:31 PM.
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07-09-05, 08:37 PM | #5 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: E3B2 691B
Battle me u got nothing to lose so imma leave u flowless
You use your name as motivation to make sure that u stay focused How do I know this……… ima philosopher I know lots in this joint Like I know u looking forward to a loss now that’s the wrong focal point Its like beauty cause this battle is in the eye of the beholder It gets colder…… u cant win this battle if u was a solider You like r.kelly telling all chapters of how u was trapped in the closet Until u came out and donated to your boyfriends semen deposit I flow like a fossit……cause im moving on a continuous basis So find new places…… when this battle over you’ll need an oasis* You came with the big dogs so know its time to play You wont stay…… even your focus is running away You couldn’t handle this battle if I told u to hold this You looking at the king of rapverse so no wonder u wanna stay focused *oasis place or time of relief: a place or period that gives relief from a troubling or chaotic situation
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07-09-05, 08:39 PM | #6 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: E3B2 691B
okay good battle man lets get the voting started
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07-09-05, 09:28 PM | #7 | |
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This was feedback posted for STAY FOCUS
IP: E31E 5CBB
LOL . .. its hard to vote . . . both had a great drop . . . focus i'm impressed for a newbie u did pretty well especially against philosopher who also drop a sick verse . . . um . . i promise to post a vote i just gotta think about it more
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07-09-05, 09:58 PM | #8 | |
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This was feedback posted for MC:Philosopher
IP: B1A5 868C
yo mc philsopher u r crew mayn! ima tell u watz good, ur verse wuz ok. need to wotrk on ur punchlinez mayn, an ur wordplay culd b betta 2, but i think u got da win here i wuz feelin sum ov ur rhymez, juz stay ''focused'' on making a mockery of ur oppenent, stay on a personal level miexed wit sum humouress pounchlinez, decent verse though mayn
uppin 4 krew
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07-10-05, 01:52 AM | #9 |
B.I.G.
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IP: DD02 1081
Voted For: MC:Philosopher
aight.. yo! Mc:Phillosopher - aight flow, structure, not a big vocab, nice nameplay, n multi's.. tight punches, good personals Stay Focus - no flow, no structure, good punches, no personals, FORCED RHYMES ^^^I think I said enough on this: Focus - Use personals and fix that structure.. just an advice, no hate and MC, RTF... lol ... battle on my sig.. 1 MORE VOTE PLZ!!! lol Overal: MC - 9/10 (jus a lil fix in the structure) Saty Focus - 5/10 (I already told u what to do.. good luck on the next battle) V/MC
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07-10-05, 09:32 AM | #10 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: 6E9F CEB3
thanx khaoz ill work on it fam. and flo verse just take your time dont rush and make the wrong vote no matter who it is. you uppin for some votes
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07-10-05, 01:02 PM | #11 |
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IP: 6E9F CEB3
uppin need some more votes in here....................
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07-10-05, 06:49 PM | #12 |
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IP: 6E9F CEB3
uppin for some votes in here drop your link ill hit u back
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07-11-05, 08:12 AM | #13 |
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IP: 65D8 B366
uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..
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07-11-05, 12:48 PM | #14 | |
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IP: CDA8 A0B5
Voted For: STAY FOCUS
stay focus stayed his focus on this battle withh good opening and an alrite closing so overall i think that he took this 1 by an inch....AHEM BY MILES Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.
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07-11-05, 04:32 PM | #15 |
~lyrical confucius~
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IP: 9D9A CC94
uppin man and stop coming to my battles with your votes that are hate votes man u a herb
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