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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 07-21-05 at 07:26 PM

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Stanza has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 06:39 PM.

DoContinue has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-21-05 07:11 PM.

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!


the second line was a play on wrestling...monday night RAW...

Man I Got This win Yo You Suck Ass lol

I cant beleave I actually wasted my lines on yo wack ass

Voted For: Stanza

Beatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
...aight opener 6/10
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
....lol...nice 8/10
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found..
Like Lost internet Connections
.....lol good closer 8/10
22/30...nice one u did very good job here nice battle and nice punches kept the verse interestin and fun....they were hittin hard too...fav. was closer

time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
aight opener 4/10
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
aight good wordplay there 6/10
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
...lol nice closer hard hittin 8/10
18/30
ok nice punches here as well but didnt feel ur opener taht much culda been a tie there but ur opener was very weak need to improve on that.....but it was an aight thing jus keep it up but that closerbut the rock and smackdown was good though wrestling is old so didnt it that hard as uwanted to....

v/ Stanza verse was a lil better harder punches.....

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Voted For: Stanza

A'ight...this was pretty one sided...Stanza came with harder punches...decent flow from both...DoContinue...I liked that play on wrestling, but it wasn't enough to take this......but yeah this was a pretty one sided battle...Stanza gets it for comin a lil harder...

No hate...

Return the favor...PLEASE ITS BEEN FUCKING SLEPT ON!!!

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Voted For: Stanza

Stanza
eatin You Is Gonna Be Funny like Chris Rock Becomin Dope In Ya Sig
6-0 Battle Rec...5 from No Shows....25$ on Hand....Yeah You Livin Big
Statement and weak punch.
Waitin On Dude to Throw a Punch?...Id Rather wait for The Dead To Rise
Because I See Through This Dude Like He Had Rental Wrap As a Disquise
I blah blah blah.
Im Stoppin The Dude Sickness Like Medical Aids Clearin Yo Infections
He say He Delivers Punchez But..The Server Cannot be found.. Like Lost internet Connections
Ohh, I actually liked this closer. Cept for the set up.

Overall, I don't see why you say you are amazing. You make statements and go "I will, I do" blah blah blah. Work on making punches, not statements or self glorification lines.

DoContinue
time to make this bastard hurt, blast his shirt, Stanza RAW? he aint
put his polls in tha catholic church and we still not lookin up to St.
No. Bad personal and set up was weak.
He switched crews now RAW IS WAR... so its time that i crack down
he wanna headbang? does this punk like ROCK? well im finna lay the smackdown!!
I'm gonna line, wordplay was ok.
We'll never see him contact lines, or spit wit a nice rhyme
his punches connect like women's TV-only once in a LIFETIME!!
Ok closer, but nothing that great.

Overall, you didn't have that many punches. Only one I found was your closer. Your wordplay was blah, but that doesn't count as a punch.

Vote goes to Stanza for having a decent closer. The rest of the verses sucked. DC had some wordplay, but that's it. Work on better wordplay Stanza.

v- Stanza

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yo this is ok but i cant vote yet so i'ma say big up on ya choice of words

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