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Topic: Silence

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Check in by: 07-20-05 at 11:43 PM

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B-MAC has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-19-05 10:11 PM.

A Job that can only be fullfilled, By a quick and Silent Figure.

Entrenched in the long grass, that grows from the Field
Gilli suit for camouflage, to prevent from being Revealed
Concealed, as a sniper I’ve been sent to full fill a job
Trained to be quick, slick and mysterious as If i was god
As still as a Brick, This silenced M-21 is a snipers magic stick
As if I wasn’t there, as if a bullet came from No where
Stuck the enemy straight through his Scared Stare
Hitting the ground with a profound Sound
I crep up to a nearby mound, Take aim at the nearby prey
They will come to his rescue sooner or later today
I’m like a tree falling in the woods, When no one is around
With out a sound to be heard, no one says a word.
As I lay atop this mound, Motionless I glare into my scope
As a enemy your hopeless, when I grab a hold of this trigger
This cross hair, cares little for these rebel ditch diggers
The statistics and figures weigh 10 to 1
But like a needle in this corn field, I cant be out done
Like a snake yah cant hear me, But yet I’m so near
Silent as a ghost, as quick as a light year

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Spoken Word has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-20-05 11:36 AM.

Aiight here it is ... Good Luck

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Good Job Hommie.. LEts get some votes................

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uppin this for some votes people, ill rtf.......

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Voted For: Spoken Word

ayo i mean damn homie you was ill the vocab,stucture and shit homie you got this homie i uppin this cuz ur ill homie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!B-MAC u was good but the tapic silence came more to spoken homie but u was ill too but spoken got more feeling!!!!!!!!!

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upping for more votes drop a link ill rtf.........

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Voted For: B-MAC

you took this battle by inches

best punch;
As if I wasn’t there, as if a bullet came from No where
Stuck the enemy straight through his Scared Stare
nice

weak punch:
As a enemy your hopeless, when I grab a hold of this trigger
This cross hair, cares little for these rebel ditch diggers
...needs elevation/.../...

werd...tight battle






vote:B-MAC

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