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08-07-05, 02:36 AM | #1 | ||||||
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This one cats was abused strongly and used wrongly
IP: CF74 5D3A
This one cats was abused strongly and used wrongly
To gather drugs while wearing leathers as a thug homey Was hurt made mistakes with blunder not great to be Under pressure, thrill with rhyme just to kill time it free His nerves just to twist words in the form of rhyme Truth is renowned but he goofed around with nickel and dime Stuff, like standing in parade rest he made a mess of marching And stress squashing his pride time to test while people watching Him waste time and not lace rhymes with reality they booed At the taste of lime bitter hit their ears, the dude stayed rude With verse he devastate foe and regulate flow like an accelerator So he feast and then increase the fuel to dual as a well creator Of verse, in the hummer with aggression for school attend Summer sessions just to get a dandy girl with candy curls in Her hair |
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08-07-05, 03:21 AM | #2 | |||||||
RV aint Dead
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IP: 163E 90A2
it was aight
good but not good it was str8
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08-07-05, 12:07 PM | #3 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
S.P thanks for th epeeps and the props
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08-07-05, 12:10 PM | #4 | |||
Just searching.
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IP: 3240 794D
I could understand this one, pretty much.
Not a real original storyline and some of it seemed forced. You're improving, but your ego is still the same, I guess. |
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08-07-05, 02:17 PM | #5 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
start understanding the realness up in here
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08-07-05, 03:06 PM | #6 | ||||
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IP: 258C A279
is this all you do, is OM's all day?..
..just wondering
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08-07-05, 03:21 PM | #7 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
commit blunders but quit and wonders where I went wrong, spent long hours studying my mistakes then twist great verse solid like hydraulics no frolics involved
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08-09-05, 01:01 AM | #8 | |||||
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 28AD 5545
this was an iight piece...sick multis as usual good structure, made it flow nice...still kinda short though......up on vocab.....make it enhance as ur piece goes along.....im diggin this one homey
Rtf on my sig links.......cool runnings |
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08-09-05, 07:51 AM | #9 | ||||||
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IP: CF74 5D3A
all right thanks fo rthe props on this one for real yall
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