i see them now.
the gates are shining brightly.
beckoning me towards them.
i never knew i had earned this;
this magnificent treasure, the gift of gifts.
wait. where are the pearly gates?
these are shiny like a precious metal lit from an unseen fire.
am i? no i don't deserve this. NOOOOOOOOOOO!
the morning rays of the sun hit the black bars of my cell
and i'm hit with the realization that i am seperated
from God, my family, and my friends are gone.
i'm in hell.
another 10-15 to go.

-Chip

__________________


"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

it was str8 so u in jail is dat wat u tryn ta say

__________________

link to a poem i liked:http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=196313

more poems by me:
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=202397
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=200947

__________________


"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

never been to jail, but the letters my brother sent me gave me enuff understanding of what he went thru to write this poem. uppin' for more feedback.

another poem i liked:http://community.rapverse.com/showt...ewpost&t=194418

__________________


"I don't want to be deep... I want to feel deep and use that feeling to express depth itself..."
-Konchance

my poetry:
untitled

honestly i didnt like the poem because i didnt know wat you were talking about at all i guess u were in jail but you didnt make it noticed jus by talking about the bars you should have talked about the food,clothes,otha cell mates etc you could up your vocab also and ya imagery

__________________
PLEAZE LEAVE FEEDBACK
Satan's Call
Devotion
Unbidden Goal