SLIPPING

Length of rhyme strength is mine duration like Samson devastation //
Cats lack intensity with whack density scripts no sophistication //
Alleviate pressure, create a treasure to keep hope alive //
Deep with the dope jive, turn about is fair play scope and strive //
I’m a thug about to put cats in the dugout I’m above suspicion //
Love the mission, a scrub stand trial in this edition key in my the ignition //
Thug on the verge while my blood surge, pleasing picture be squeezing //
Scripture like economic recovery, Ebonics discovery of street lingo seizing //
Ironic to draw gun like Johnny Ringo, atomic when I sling verse yo //
Crew can’t figure my renewed vigor, glued the gun trigger now holster flow //
Bolster those rap by rhyming, critical about to cook wit a political out look //
Onstage, MADD it’s whack how facts stack like books cats are shook //
On how you rap stag, slap a *** wearing a dew rag while crew brag they mistook //
Your rhymes and hardcore lines, yeah kid even more times I’ve manage to cook //
Bread and feed cats sandwich spread and bandage their head with cotton because //
They’re misled and rotten belong to the bottom I twist and anoint but cats pause //
And miss the point mad classy rap in a nasty joint kid, but MADD why cats play a joke //
And delay folk and postpone a microphone? Kid cats prevail but fail in their quotes //
Curtail smoke and nails all the females choke with tongue are their antidotes? //
Madd stuff get shabby we glad to call PUFF DADDY he didn’t get time now he’s //
Starting a wet SHYNE in the game trying to lay low kissing on JAY LO but kid MC’S //
Got a lot to say doe, if it don’t fit you must acquit like ****RAN pay high fees //
It’s hard to keep a club card in a love affair make you want to shoot up in the air //
But you can get handcuff like PUFF so I’ve had enough putting grease in my hair //

ya flow is hot nice multis good choise of words nice concept or good feestyle shit really flow well i mean dag u did a excellet job lets do a track one day

fraud thanks fo rthe props for real yo

my link (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=205835)

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what is adequte feedback hey man get off my back

^Nucca make feedback that actually helps the person who dropped it not just
I liked this peice.. you did very good... nice topic..okay imagery..good drop
^no fool

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why do you have to draw out all that i tald him he used too many I'S and it will improve his flow come on man do your job hell this not communism