can anybody tell me how it feels to get cought pop'in phill
infront of the police station, a crack-head desperation is how i feel
reguardless of the deal, i wont admit or squeel
niggas is real, so why round these "rats" tierd like they runing on a tredmill
its like cuting the dre-lock from a jamaican, u gonna be dead-4-real
but if u dont walk the street load'ed. then its another body in-a grave-filed
this rap is what keep's me going till my mic-N-mouth attached
and my hand-N-steel-is-lacked, I bust all i got then beat'em with the steel-last
im like a 70 dude, cuz ya AZZ-FROZE(afro) like u was trying to be PICKED
might as-well pro-claim ass-hole, cuz im gonna be the shit
its like a "addict thoughts", ya career looking like u "gonna need a hit"
this transexual like a broken door-nob, u gonna need a switch
reguardless im gonna flow my hardeist, like hurrican waves
and people all around the world can say hey i herd of hes-name
but the way i do it, its like god telling me how can i do so many-thing
and have this dieing-men-cut(dimon-cut) like a jewlery-bling
the way i come pre-paird, its more then enough for 2 man-can-bring
but thats the problem, i dont need to go this rout
but everytime i think of green it has noting 2 do with sourcrout
look, understand murdering niggas is all im about
but god plez help me, N show ya face from outt them clouts (clouds)
but there aint no answer like im trying to cure aids
N if i dont change, im a drug-lord thas gonna die takein' order like a maid
ya-dont-say??

can anybody help me??????

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i will now give me a min

http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2388871

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hey look playa this was al right but you use too many I's it would flow alot better ut keep dropping and tune up