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08-22-05, 08:48 AM
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Intermental feat. Jessica - Why Me
IP: 2112 516E
First minute is a sample intro from Jessica singing, she is the winner of Road To Stardom, please dont jus quit and not listen to the song before I start, this song has alot of emotion I think, im tryin to up my game mad here....I tried loads of things to make it better quality....thank yall....
www.soundclick.com/intermental "Why Me"
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08-22-05, 08:49 AM
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IP: 2112 516E
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08-22-05, 08:49 AM
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IP: 2112 516E
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08-22-05, 10:06 AM
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singing was a nice addition...perhaps 40 seconds too long
beat is okay relax yaself when u flow...get better breath control because it sounded like u were rushing ur flow in spots I like the voice u brought to the track though not bad lyrics sound personal = good not a bad track dawg keep at it |
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08-22-05, 10:56 AM
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IP: CD34 70A7
Thanks alot man...........
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08-22-05, 11:07 AM
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nice intro, like tha q said, its to long lol, wayyy to long but blah who cares, the beat is kinda dope seriously, i love it, where did u get it, your gettin better man, lyrics are dope, mmm watch your flow man, quality is wayyyy better than before, man how come lol ? anyway overall pretty dope track man
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08-22-05, 11:08 AM
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IP: CD34 70A7
Thanks alot dawg..........
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08-22-05, 11:18 AM
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okay lets see...................
that jessica part is way too long....lol...cut that alittle...... yea...waht those otehers says...work with ya flow.... quality was way more betta.......i like it.....gd job dawg... just cut that jessicas part...and make ur part longer..... nice job man...u mad elevated..........
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08-22-05, 11:21 AM
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IP: CD34 70A7
Thanks alot dawg....rlly appreciate it
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08-22-05, 04:36 PM
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As well , I like the Intro, It was a nice twist.. Your flow sounds good, needs a bit of work, but for the most part its dope, This was a good track some areas need to be improved.. But dope shit///////
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08-22-05, 05:59 PM
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IP: 33C8 1AA5
Thanks alot dawg i really appreciate it
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08-22-05, 06:39 PM
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IP: 33C8 1AA5
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08-22-05, 06:49 PM
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singin was straight..u prolly could put her on the beat...
ya flow is rushed off the jump..fix ya flow take ya time..u aint hittin the snare either..delivery is ok..quality could be upped tho..u got some things to work on tho..ya flow and it sounds like u tryna whisper in some spots..might just be me..but just bring everything up some levels..
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08-22-05, 07:27 PM
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IP: 77C7 37AC
Iite thanks i appreciate it,
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08-22-05, 09:49 PM
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cool trak. for da person who asked about the beat. it's a nas beat. intro too long, i think u should have incorporated it wit the beat.
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