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Old 08-27-05, 01:53 PM   #1
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DREAMS (with John Storm & Dee Murdock)
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yes I understand that many have done this beat before but I giveth not a FUCK what you think =) my boi Dee gave me the track last night so I wrote it then got up this morning and recorded it, hoLLerrrrrr...

P.S. John's vocals are low, but I got it ike that...



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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 08-27-05, 02:48 PM   #2
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typing as I listen....ok first verse vocals is low as hell I cant hear what he saying....an from what I hear his delivery is ass....wow his verse emotionless....maybe if I heard what he was saying he woulda passed but that was terrible....now 2nd dude comes in good vol....he got a young/corny voice....his rhymes is simple as hell.....lyrics is eh as well...I am not feeling this at all so far......ok LV comes in decent vol.....ok same flow u always use.....delivery is decent at best but yet the best on song so far.....the rhyme scheme is wack....it gets boring after a while....u stuck wit same one thru whole song....it got old after the 6th bar.....if u had a stronger delivery it wouldn't have been so obvious....overall this was a big dropoff for you LV..I aint gon front this was wack as hell to me...I'm jus being real no hate involved at all....stay up....1
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Old 08-29-05, 08:36 AM   #3
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thanx Trip...iono why I bother posting here, nobody pays attention -smh-
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 08-30-05, 10:30 AM   #4
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*clears throat*

hhmmmmm..............
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Quote:
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LV - real talk as usual..dope shit
you're like the best story teller over a beat

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my whole album is inspired by you LV.
thats how i got this classic album.
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Old 08-30-05, 02:16 PM   #5
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same thing as the other dude said

vocals are VERY LOW
And from what I CAN make out, it sounds like he was readin his rap from a peice of paper.
like the girl from kunck if you buck
the 2nd verse, his rhyme scene is decent, ALOT better then the first person.
The 3rd person had the best emotion.
But, when it comes down to it, I dont really like the song at all.
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