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Dizzee Rascal 2 28.57%
Wicked One 5 71.43%
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Old 06-20-05, 11:35 PM   #1
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Wicked One vs Dizzee Rascal

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Old 06-20-05, 11:36 PM   #2
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Wicked One has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-20-05 11:36 PM.
 
Old 06-21-05, 07:25 AM   #3
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Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-21-05 07:25 AM.
 
Old 06-21-05, 03:35 PM   #4
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Wicked Wicked
Jungle is massive.....

Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket)
Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)
Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation
No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself
Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *
A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes *2

I h8 to do this but ima break it down

* Under-mime his postion but metaphor of imagery of an under mime postion as tho their having sex
2* Ok basically his gender, optimistic cus of high hopes cus the 'High' bit picture giving birth to a high bitch it all hazy n shit hence the genders hazy

If you dont appreciate the plays/meta's dont vote
Good luck g
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Old 06-22-05, 02:52 PM   #5
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Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...
This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...
Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...
Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial...
Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself...
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Old 06-23-05, 12:35 PM   #6
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Old 06-24-05, 02:14 PM   #7
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Old 06-25-05, 01:10 PM   #8
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Vote up bitches

1 vote for me 2 rtv 2wicew
seems fair
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Old 06-25-05, 08:14 PM   #9
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Voted For: Wicked One

This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...

^that line was mad hot wicked.

Aight leme break it down.

Wicked one:Your flow is mad dope fam.
rolled off the tounge.Seemed like a actual battle.
I'm feelin the closer alot too.The punches seemed
consistant.only prob was the structure.Everything else
is on point fam.Big ups.

Dizze rascal:aight 1st off your flow was off alot.
You had some good shit in there but not GREAT.
the opener was a light attempt at wordplay i wasn't feelin.
structure was off also.It was still ok just step ya game
up.I'ma go with wicked one on this.

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Old 06-25-05, 11:15 PM   #10
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Old 06-26-05, 03:56 PM   #11
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Old 06-27-05, 01:57 AM   #12
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Voted For: Wicked One

Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket (wicked/wicket)
aight..
Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)
weak punch
Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation
decent multies, punch was okay
No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself
wtf.. didn’t like this line
Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *
decent
A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes
nope


Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...
decent opener
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...
coo
This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...
weak
Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...
okay
Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from the bottom of a downward sprial...
flow = too long.. punch was aight
Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself...
decent closer

overall both verses were aight..
punches were okay.. & both structures need help
DR.. work on ur punches cuz them shits were
pretty weak.. fix ur structure, & add some personas
up in ur verses, u 2 Wicked.. ur punches were
weak too, but u took this one cuz ur shits weren’t
as weak as DR’s tho..
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Old 07-02-05, 03:29 PM   #13
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Old 07-02-05, 09:23 PM   #14
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Fuck ya gimic cus line ya stomach wiv faeces ya cudnt spit sick shit
Combining boxing n cricket u know my punches strike out wicket
^^Decent I guess....4/10
Thick bitch couldnt campaign for a win yet brings re-petition/repetition
So ur verses lack back bone nowonder you flop for the competition (verses-VS)
^^^OK......4/10
Just listen in amazement ill line ya cheek bone have ur jaw adjacent
Complacent? Its a statement ill 'end one' like finishing conversation
^^nah......3/10
No debation ill hit stealth curious that ill stampede on ur health
Making an alias to hide only time ull make a name for yourself
^^Nice.......7/10
Im striking violence listen split this organism like internal fission
Consider 'mating silence' the way i under-mime ur position *
^^Creative........6/10
A magician make u dissapear cus we all know you try chokes
Optimistic that ur genders hazy like pregnants with high hopes
^^^OK.....5/10

A lot a mediocre punches here.The one with makin a name for yourself with alias is ur best one.U had some creative lines in there.Flow was igth.But need some more heat in ur punches.

Hey Ho it's the same ol' same ol' great flows make ya brain explode...
Talk yo shit and cross that bridge so the carnage can take it's toll...
^^^1st line suked....3/10
This is a recipe for distaster, realize your battling the master..
With razor blades, I'll leave you with more cuts than terrible actors...
^^SG.........3/10
This dude is on crack, thinkin I wont be able to strike back ..
Thats laugthter, I'm on the war path holding more arms than heart attack havers...
^^^SG.......2/10
Come see this lame, look at the ego, thinking he left me rattled...
Please, he's now in the fight for his life like a custody battle...
^^OK.....a lil simplisitic...4/10
Forfit this battle, and retire, you'll never take my title...
This dudes trying to measure up to Dizzee Rascal from
the bottom of a downward sprial...
^^ight......5/10
Man fuck you and your frozen ice solid stare I'm making it melt...
Please, testin me is a game of solitaire you're playing yourself
^^SG a bit.....3/10

Too much self glorifing.Chill out with that bullshit.Focus on dissing.Talk about urself in Open Mic only.Flow was Ok but went off near the end.Structure was ight.But ur punches and SG caused you to lose.

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Old 07-04-05, 07:58 PM   #15
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