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Old 09-25-05, 09:31 PM   #1
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Mister Elegiac vs. Mystic Chaos

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Old 09-25-05, 09:55 PM   #2
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Word, check and stuff.
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Old 09-26-05, 04:18 PM   #3
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alright, checkin in....g'luck mate
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Old 09-27-05, 07:38 PM   #4
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I know ya type, n i aint even see you spit..
Ya rap like ya constipated...ya force ya shit

^lol come on..you know u laughed...i sure as hell did.........
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Old 09-27-05, 08:05 PM   #5
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Lemme put this 'animal to rest,' he's wack so whatcha expect?
Because I'll be 'stuffing you, deer(dear)' like a 'taxidermy project!'

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G'luck. I'll edit this post with links when there is 2 more to vote on.
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Old 09-27-05, 08:33 PM   #6
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...I'd give this to Mister Elegiac but I'm in the Council. Or do crew votes don't matter? But really...constipation jokes, when they aren't original...nah.
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Old 09-27-05, 08:34 PM   #7
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Dude you can't vote anyway lol you're not in the punch league..
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Old 09-28-05, 03:56 AM   #8
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Mystic Chaos

I know ya type, n i aint even see you spit..
Ya rap like ya constipated...ya force ya shit
Eh... It's Ok. Not Really Very Original Or Creative. Makes Sense, But Has That Played Factor. Overall, It's An Average Line And Bar.

Mister Elegiac

Lemme put this 'animal to rest,' he's wack so whatcha expect?
Because I'll be 'stuffing you, deer(dear)' like a 'taxidermy project!'
lol... Cool Wordplay. Seen The Dear/Deer Wordplay Be Used Some And Heard It Was Played, But It's A Good Flip. Good Wording And Concept. Overall, Good Bar.

Vote - Mister Elegiac - This Was A Pretty One Sided Match. ME Came With A Much More Original Flip Than MC. More And Better Wordplay As Well As A Better Concept. Cool Battle, But Mister Elegiac Takes This.
 
Old 09-28-05, 05:18 AM   #9
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pretty average bar from elegiac, and a real weak bar from mystic

the whole forcin ya shit concept is played, and the whole using constipated as wordplay for forcing shit is played........so two times the playedness in ure bar.
elegiac, not the most original bar, the concept was flipped but it was still kinda played but it was a lot better than mystic's bar.

V/ - Mister Elegiac
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Old 09-28-05, 07:36 AM   #10
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dam mystic.. you let us down lol.. it was funny in it's own way but make the conceot better n shit word them better aswell

mister elegiac... pretty decent bar good job.

v/ mister elegiac
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Old 09-28-05, 08:23 AM   #11
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v/Mister Elegiac...
 
Old 09-28-05, 10:15 AM   #12
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you both sucked

vote-elegiac for not coming completely played....a constipated punchline, come on now
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Old 09-28-05, 10:59 AM   #13
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V/ Mister

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Old 09-29-05, 10:28 PM   #14
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Boooo Chaos, that concepts been used so much.

V/Misterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr...
 
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Lmao @ the huge explanation by Drop Dead.

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