THIS IS NOT A DISS TO CHRISTIANS FIRST OF ALL

This is my point of view which has been racially abused by all races even my own religion has problems within which I explore in this track. Best I have done, and it contains so many subliminal messages which I hope you pick up. And all the racist people on this board shud recognize, no one on rv has ever done this before, this is crazy, this is Intermental...

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"A REAL MUSLIM"

will edit with links

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intro...sounds like ur putting ur voice on....

beat is ill....LOL @ how over-hyped this track is...lyrically this is meh, flow is boring me now...hook is actually pretty gd...a lil low tho...get sum1 to compress ur vocals...flow is choppy like a chef board in 2nd verse...your not really saying anything...adam n eve, we believe in similar thing so why do u differentiate...meh..not feelin it blud...DV n CALI's n 7/3rd's terrorist track addressing same issue was a lot better and a lot more in depth...outro once again, u sound like the voice is being put on...average RV track ...1

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thanks for feedin, but its not a puttin on voice, i am ugandan maybe It was hard to do because I am american, but thas how my parents talk

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Listening...

I love this beat...Nice intro..."Understand me, hear me"...Flow is decent, like Acuity said it's choppy in places...lyrics it's a'ight...I'm feelin the message you givin, even though I'm Christain...I really like the hook actually...Quality is good in this track...

Just keep it up man...your best yet.

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thanks I apreciate it.......

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beginning was cool...poignant...change of voice was unique


your words are felt...cudda rode the beat more smoothly...beat sounds choppy so your flow needs to be continuous


not a bad track though

real


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Thanks I apreciate it...poignant?...hope thas good......

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exactly,...you were attempting to imitate the voice of your parents and it was bait

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Being a Christian, I think it's cool that you stand up for what you believe in. But you don't have to call us simple minded

beat is cool. dont really like it though. i think it matches the topic that you tryna give.

lyrically you give a lot of facts that i somewhat agree with.

chorus. i hate it. only because you keep whispering allah in the background.

flow was on point for the most point. just wish you coulda switched it up.

the intro and outro is scary u sound like you wanna kill someone.


this was a cool track. not really something i personally enjoyed listening to but overall it was pretty good.

Peepin this track....first i peeped from you..Im studying the muslim relgion myself..i should enjoy it..feelin the intro.....the beat comes in nice.dope beat. im not feelin the way you rapped on here..prolly woulda liked this alot more if ya delivery was different..instead of the whisperin type ....some hard core delivery woulda made this some crack shit fa real.. im lovin the messege u got and the chorus im feelin that shit...aasalama laakum. lol however u spell that ...lol ....

walaum salam my brodda...and Im feelin the feedback.....thanks and Implicit I am not callin you simple minded I am calling some christians simple minded

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umm i aint feelin the talkin at the begginin lol....

beat is kool i like this man..

is this hook? its iite... stop whisperin on ya tracks lyrically its pretty good, you said some kool fings. quality is straight, flow is different but effective.

hook is pretty good like it.

seconed verse same as first really nothing i can point out thats faulty nice verse mate..


hook again i like this its real kool lol....

iite i aint really feelin ya voice at the end of the track.. but thats jus my opinion..

good track man keep it up

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Yea I mite jus edit them out maybe not the intro one tho..dunno..apreciate the feed....

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its all good man. dont worry. i've heard a lot worst. but the talking in the intro and outro is still scary.