Distinctive sunsine glistening in my eye its fine
Terrible glare at that, reach my watch for the time
Propelled to get active to make day worth the while
Repelled actions makes people frown and yet i smile
Confused accusations for accused entraped relations
Refused to dwell on the subject speak my mind...no hesitations
Days go on living life fine destined to make a path
Living an outsiders perspective well they can kiss my ass
Making my own ways for the cold days ill have the last laugh
Liven life in the strife gutta get out the slums no place to be at
Ressurectin my soul to reach my lifetime goal...gettin out the ghetto
Spendin days lonely with nobody to hold me not ready to let go
My life is set so given up is what has come to be the outcome
Head tilted down no longer smilen im set to frown liven in the city slums

O.Y.D.

Originally Posted by Mystic Chaoscreativity[B never seen it before, so it was original to me........[/B] multiswasn't too impressed in this department, but it was good from a rap standpoint...... vocabokay...... i think sometimes people use overly over-the-top voc. and it distracts the reader..... u might wanna work on that.... structure/flowgood structure after u fixed it....... mostly good flow, but i had a hard time catching it...... Conceptsorta played topic, but i never get tired of seeing new twists on it.....