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Old 10-24-05, 02:05 PM   #1
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Old 10-24-05, 02:08 PM   #2
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you posted no sounclick link mate...
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Old 10-24-05, 02:19 PM   #3
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fixed ^^........
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Old 10-24-05, 03:40 PM   #4
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Listenin DOnt FDeel The Beat..........Flow Is Aight Presence is ok emotion is good but ya vocals r weird hold ya mic steady ya know? seems like it goin forward then back lol The Lyrics r good try n make ya mic stay in the same position lol seems sometimes too loud then too low lol but good drop nice try keep up

Rtf On My I Am Real Track Plz
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Old 10-24-05, 03:46 PM   #5
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vocals WAYY TOO LOUD at the start

beat is ehhh


u need better mixing for ur vocals...I heard quite a few POPS...back away from the mic dawg...do u have a pop filter?


ur flow is pretty good

delivery is monotonous though

lyrics seem decent at best


not a bad track dawg


RTF please

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Old 10-24-05, 05:32 PM   #6
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vocals too loud...............get a pop filter.....

and work on mixing.....


presence...is ok at some points....sometimes you go away from the mic it seems like....

delivery is pretty good......

lyrics ok....

work on breath control too....you can hear where your taking tons of deep breaths....
and sometimes it seems like your about to run out of breath...

you got potential man...definitely....but there are bunch of lil in and out things you can work on.....
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Old 10-24-05, 05:40 PM   #7
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thx a lot ppls and i will RTF
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Old 10-24-05, 05:43 PM   #8
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word....RTF on my track....Screw Your Prizes....its should be at the top in this forum
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Old 10-25-05, 09:25 AM   #9
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iight..i'll check that shit now
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