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Old 10-24-05, 07:31 AM   #1
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Kontroverzy Ft Prospekt - Fight Klub Muzik

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OKay i had the wrong song Up. The Correct song is now Up! Check it out.!

Kontroverzy Ft Prospekt - Fight Klub Muzik

First verse : Kontroverzy
Chorus: kontroverzy
Second Verse: Prospekt
Beat: Ozone productions
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Old 10-24-05, 08:34 AM   #2
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beat is sick... flow is nice, sounds abit jerky at time, delivery is cool... lyrcs are ok, rhyme scheme is abit basic though, becomes very predictable n therefore boring, quality is good... not bad here man, i think u could have done more for the hook rather than leaving it so bland n basic n empty
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Old 10-24-05, 12:04 PM   #4
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Beats decent...


Ill flow and deliverey

Lyrics are average, pannings decent...

good treack mate

am feelin this a lot man


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Old 10-24-05, 12:52 PM   #5
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Old 10-24-05, 02:04 PM   #6
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like the beat...nice voice and good flow,not GREAT quality..need to turn sumthin down idk..ummm chorus was not great..lyricaly 6 maby 7/10
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Old 10-24-05, 04:59 PM   #7
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beat is sick... flow is nice, sounds abit jerky at time, delivery is cool... lyrcs are ok, rhyme scheme is abit basic though, becomes very predictable n therefore boring, quality is good... not bad here man, i think u could have done more for the hook rather than leaving it so bland n basic n empty


yeah, i feel ya man. thanks for the feedback
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Old 10-24-05, 05:00 PM   #8
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Wtf This Aint Even The Song Lmfao
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Old 10-24-05, 07:35 PM   #9
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aiight i got the right song up. and it's good quality aswell..
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Old 10-24-05, 09:04 PM   #10
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but yea...beat is fine for what it is


I see you're about making popular music...

...didn't like the echoed adlib effect


1st cat...flow was on beat...delivery wasn't bad


**lyrics were what they were...nothing major

Hook...intriguing...fight club...is that some local thing? iono


2nd cat...voice is ehh...IMO

flow is on

delivery is pretty decent

rhyming is consistent


overall, a decent track dawg



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Old 10-24-05, 09:34 PM   #11
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word famz. i respect the honest feedback.
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alright listening too it now...that ozone beat is fire..the set it off beat....kon you of course had some dope flow and a dope presense...your shit was pretty damn tight lyrics were pretty sick......your emotion was nice......presense was there .....good for this typa song.....the hook is cool....shoulda tried too change up ya flow it a bit more but it was pretty sick.....2nd person is dope....the flow is reall nice......there presense is real good and emotions really good....really sticks out...overall this is a pretty dope song...keep this shit up.... 8/10

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Old 10-24-05, 10:31 PM   #13
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koo track mang, i can imagine u mafuckaz in a vid fo it in tha club dancin round n shit, LOL. good quality n flow n lyrics wuz aight. def marketable shit, u know, werd
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Word homie i was feeling this ...Sick beat... nice delivery and flow by all who was on the track..lyrics were decent felt they could have been alittle better..but overall it was a pretty decent track..keep it up homie
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Old 10-24-05, 10:37 PM   #15
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everyones lyrics could of been a little bit better :S .lol but thanx for the feedback.
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