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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
10-24-05, 10:00 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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Multies In Quarters
IP: 12E7 3621
yeah just somthing breif showing i do know how too write multies and shit lol its got some dope flow in Status's opinion well he said he liked it check it out
www.soundclick.com/jayjking peep it out and let me know what you think if you leave feed i'll leave feed links ---- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=175715 ---- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211974
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10-25-05, 11:51 AM
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IP: 1ADC A69C
again...a 90s style beat
not bad u had multies...but could have deliveried them better...and yes, I can flow with more multies than u...  flow is pretty cool delivery was aiigh like the gay lovers line...haaa not bad dawg...nothing major though keep flowin...ur good RTF please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212670
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10-25-05, 11:56 AM
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Nt Your Average
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IP: 7517 E0CF
Hmmm.I Dont Like Thios Old School Beats
The Vocals Seem A Lil Low Need A Lil More Delivery These Lyric R Good Like The Way You Made This Sound Need A Lil More Emtion I dont Like The Half Time Bit Overall:6/10 Plz RTF On My Rebirth Trasck
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10-25-05, 02:19 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 0A93 EAAB
beat is dope and yes the flow could have more power to it,
you had osme good lines but then you had some bad lines like i said we should collab to this but a different beat with out a sampled chorus so we can both bless the chorus with our skills, and yo you just need to get that toturial i was teliingyou about so your qaulity can be alot beter believe the quality is a big thing even if you do recor din the studio these rough drafts still need to sound pretty
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10-25-05, 02:35 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 12E7 3621
word famo....i got you....and did u get taht beat i sent u? it was ill i cant remember which one it was tho lol
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10-25-05, 02:39 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP: 0A93 EAAB
nah didnt get nothing
send it again
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10-25-05, 02:55 PM
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Middle Weight
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IP: 1ADC A69C
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10-25-05, 03:00 PM
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I'm Back HOEBAG
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IP: 12E7 3621
alright q i'll have too do it tommorow and same for unf and same for status i'm going up too olympia too talk too a few labels and a few places too preform so get at me late
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10-27-05, 12:48 PM
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ILL GRAMMATIX... any other questions?
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IP: EF25 E8E6
hmmm... found one of my favorite beats from way back when.... Nas's first major single!!! anyways... not bad... ya adlibs overpowered ya main vocals... turn ya main up.... put some bass in ya adlibs... shyt was screechin' thru my speakers... aiight flow... like Q said, nuffin major... try using multies within ya lines and end with a different sound...
yada yada bing... yada yada bing ...flitta flatta banga yada yada bing... yada yada bing ...flitta flatta banga mix up how ya do ya multies so it don't get boring and use bigger words or words kats don't usually use... surprise ya audience not bad... not great... but not bad.... 6.5/10
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10-27-05, 02:39 PM
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IP: DD5E BBF3
aught i'mma do feedback tonight
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10-27-05, 09:05 PM
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L.E
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IP: DB16 D9CD
Listening...
Feelin the beat....Like Tha Q said, multies are flowed good, but not great...flow is pretty coo though...delivery was nice...quality was decent...liked the effects in the intro... Again, keep it up...holla at me for another collab one day. |
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