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5 | 71.43% |
Detinate |
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2 | 28.57% |
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Souljah vs Detinate
IP: EA80 8468
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8- 16 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Feeding 60 check 45 spit Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 07-31-05 at 01:28 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
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Detinate has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-05 12:38 PM.
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Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin* Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~
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IP: 33DE 730C
Smite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited
Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill" Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit" I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!! Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show....... self explanatory personals....if you don't get it don't vote |
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Voted For: Souljah
Souljah was just....better in this one Better peronals, betta metaphor, so he gets the punches vote and his flow was on point i could follow it all the way through, where as with Detinate i couldnt pick up on the flow right away Souljah opened his rhyme better his word-plays were nice it was creative and enjoyable My vote goes to Souljah >>>>http://community.rapverse.com/showbattlethread.php?p=2341949<<<< vote on my battle plz peeps
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Banned: For Being So Fly.....lol....my new account is Triple Sixes....
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IP: 0D11 88C9
Voted For: Souljah
Smite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited not good opener 4/10 Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill" aight 4/10 Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit" ......lol...6/10 I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!! .....lol.....aight 4/10 Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show....... bad closer 2/10 20/50 vs. Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in aight opener 4/10 Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips ok line 4/10 Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit wack line 2/10 Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel wack line 0/10 This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin* aight 4/10 Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin aight 4/10 Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~ ok closer 4/10 20/70 Weak battle but souljah did have more punches and consistently outshined the opponent with a betta verse........v/souljah.... . . . . . RTF WIT A HONEST VOTE ON 1 OF MY BATTLES IN MY SIG OR VOTE GETS DQUED.........
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IP: 100E 6465
Voted For: Detinate
v/ Detinate I thought he had better flow and had some good punches. It also had some mutlis which made the ppunches hit harder. But souljah had some punches that were better than detinate but in the end i thouight that detinate was better overall. |
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IP: A181 D033
Ok i got to go somewhere right about now but PnP and Kid Chaos I'ma hit your battles when i get back
Kamze the d/r you need to drop a proper explanation and only then will i hit up your battles |
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: F940 2708
Voted For: Souljah
Smite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited ^^mediocre multi....but punch lacked..4/10 Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill" ^^whack....doesn't work.....3/10 Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit" ^^PLAYED AS FUCK....1/10 I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!! ^^^OK....5/10... Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show ^^PLAYED.....2/10 OK...had some weak ass lines here.FLow was ok...and so was structure.Creativity sucked as did complexity.1st and 2nd bar just didn't hit well.3rd bar was probably your worse.Dog shit?...soft like a tit?...wtf is that?.Ur best line was the trinidad one....and that wasn't so hot. Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in ^^No punch....3/10 Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips ^^good multi...weak punch...3/10 Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit ^^No.....2/10 Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel ^^PLAYED....1/10 This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin* ^^why ya got * for?no punch....1/10 Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin ^^???......no......2/10 Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~ ^^no....2/10 Ok...structure and flow was better than souljahs.But without punches...wat good are they?All your punches either sucked or played.Some lines weren't even punches as it was just you glorifing yourself.So next time...just focus on dissing. Vote-Souljah RTF Please http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=203256 |
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 0893 5074
yo.........when you get back on...don't forget to return the favor please....my battle really gettin slept on.....
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IP: 517C C3E1
Voted For: Detinate
BSmite my rhymes? Your imagination must be over-excited Wid that party of wackness in your mouth where no-one's invited Nigga ain't for real, how you gonna step with limited skill Can't test i'm lyrically defined, you only terminally "ill" Nigga you soft like a tit, none of your rhymes hit ^decent flow so far, could be better. Decent hits and analogies, but you contradict yourself w/ the "soft like tit" because, even though i get it, we love tits! If you licked a canine's ass you still couldn't be spittin "fresh shit" I take it you from Trinidad with your sig white red and black Oh look we got a new K-Trini.....with rhymes just as wack!!! ^Good personals Like still waters running deep you ain't got no flow With all these blows, you might as well make this a no show....... ^pretty Good finish; I thought your name was Souljah..y is there a diff, name here? Det: Souljah aint shit i come wit sick shit to rest him Tech aint the best but i'll still 'shovel' ya chest in Get it my shits never comin weak like the kid i''m 2 rip Spit sick 'mouth '2' mouth' datz why da kid got 'flu' lips Shit u better hurry up cuz im takin over the game quick Famous? hell no kill a cat make sure u get Framed shit ^Up to now your flow is nice and smooth Yo Soljah give up get embarrassed life goes a scary meal U say u ride shotti but na the only thing ride is a Faris Wheel ^HAHAHAH This is in ya mind to rewind no rearangements so this is stayin Im sprayin a lyrical masterpiece ya shits is layin and not Payin* Mean in the muthafuckin World quit kid im not stoppin Dick Ride? Not me but u see Tizzle u start hoppin ^good personal Still get away today the day u spitin weak kid quit im shits sick im done wit u so i split ya 'Lidz' quick ~1~ ^Good start and finish. Det has to get this, because its close, but the fact that Souljah did too much self glor and dissed Det's flow when his flow was better tips my vote to Det. |
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IP: A181 D033
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A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 96DA 5CC2
Voted For: Souljah
Detinate-Your verse was pretty good...had some good concepts and nice attempt at wordplay man.....but you overall came weaker than your opponent...i just wasnt feeling yours that much...overall 5/10 |||DRKMAN||| - Your verse was pretty good structured...flowed well...nice wordplay and punches/personals....overall pretty dope verse.....again you took this becuz of creativity v/|||DRKMAN||| rtf in sig.....1
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