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10-16-05, 08:51 PM | #1 | |
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KriZ vs Defined
IP: 4E09 BD1F
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10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting 10 min to check 30 to drop house blind Minimum posts to vote: 30 Check in by: 10-16-05 at 09:21 PM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
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10-16-05, 09:07 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 9E82 E784
KriZ has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 09:07 PM.
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10-16-05, 09:13 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
Defined has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-16-05 09:13 PM.
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10-16-05, 09:15 PM | #4 | |
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IP: 9E82 E784
Aiight....
Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/ ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/ This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/ Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/ and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/ stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/ but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/ Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/ Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/* Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker. Quik shit so yeah. *- My instincts told me to rip him up basically.
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10-16-05, 09:16 PM | #5 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
Please only well explained votes....and if you dont understand the wordplay or personals dont vote
get with it kid and understand illusions fully your sig a target RED... ..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es your testaments on hold dish out grand jury grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin must be becuze your life... ........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters blah
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10-16-05, 09:24 PM | #6 | |
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IP: 9E82 E784
Good verse, i guess u like my rubber duck avy huh? Lol. Uppin on votes ppl.
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10-16-05, 11:06 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
uppin 1...........................................
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10-17-05, 02:51 AM | #8 | |
Guilty Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Defined
Wordplay- Defined. Complexity- Defined. Punches- Defined. V/ Defined. Reason- Well, pretty much he won every category by reasonable amount.. His punches hit harder even tho some missed. He had some werdplay attempts as well.. Kriz- You should try to think of some harder punches and include meta's/ similes in your punches cos they help strengthen them.. Also fix up ya rhyme scheme cos in the super soakers bar it didnt rhyme.. Well stay up homies. Return the Favor- http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211798 P'z.. |
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10-17-05, 04:44 PM | #9 | |
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I'll get 2 it later.... Im still working on my punches tho. Uppin on votes
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10-17-05, 05:33 PM | #10 | |
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IP: 4E09 BD1F
aight thanks uppin for more explained votes.......
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10-17-05, 06:53 PM | #11 | |
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IP: 6EB9 28C9
Voted For: Defined
Defined get with it kid and understand illusions fully your sig a target RED... ..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es Forced.. your testaments on hold dish out grand jury grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry Nah.. don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit Decent.. your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin must be becuze your life... ........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins Didn't connect.. las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters Pretty decent.. KriZ Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/ ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/ Not worded into a punch.. This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/ Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/ Not a punch.. and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/ stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/ Why did you fuck up your rhyme scheme? Not a punch anyway. but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/ Doesn't rhyme with anything. Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/ Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/ Intestines and Instincts don't rhyme.. not a punch.. Overall, Defined came with a pretty lackluster verse with only 2 decent punches. But, KriZ didn't come with any remotely decent lines. His rhyme scheme went to shit about half way through, and it just didn't work out for him. He didn't word his lines into punches, so when it comes down to it.. Defined gets my vote. He at least had punches and a few them came out decent. Vote - Defined Both of you should sign up for the Punchline League.. you'll elevate pretty fast there. It's a good opportunity for you to battle without messing up your record. |
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10-18-05, 02:17 AM | #12 | |
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aight thanks uppin for explained votes.................
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10-18-05, 03:18 PM | #13 | |
A Life Of Chryme
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IP: 0825 899A
Voted For: Defined
Kriz-Your verse was ok, nothing special at alllll..you had good flow man..ill give you that...your structure was exceptional...and your punches....werent really that hard hitting..you had more self glore...or some fascination with your name.....overall 5/10 Defined-Your verse was meh, nothing special...but you had less self glore than your opponent you had good flow and ideas/wordplay........ummm your punches were weak...yet they were still present....overall 6/10 v/defined rtf in a couple of days wen my battle is up...1
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10-18-05, 05:11 PM | #14 |
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IP: A41A 6CAC
Voted For: Defined
Ayo, Kriz is comin at defined wit new hard rhymes/ ya better think quik aiight? cuz u runnin outta time/ 0....didn't diss the oppenent...seemed more like a threat. This bitch is going to be first to die in tha front line/ Hit him so hard all tha time now he litterally blind/ 0...same as previous bar. and he tryna think of somethin but this masta mind/ stopped him dead in his trax, all ways claimin he got gats/ 0...this bar didn't rhyme...and no punch,again but i dont see shit besides plastic super soakers/ Now wat bitch u dumbfounded? Rip out his intestines/ 0...threats...and didn't rhyme. Pass em around 2 ppl 2 sho wat'll happen, wit instincts/* Man fuck you, bitch you gonna die and rot motha fucker. 0...threats...again. get with it kid and understand illusions fully your sig a target RED... ..........feel Punch Horns across u ruley Bull-es 4...meh...ite. your testaments on hold dish out grand jury grand fury kriz ultimative to leave in a hurry 0....no punch,just babbling. don figit..breathe..relax..0-0 remeber 1 digit the 1st mutilated rubber duck for all in Xzibit 1....weak. your concepts = Old & Tired not one is Bustin must be becuze your life... ........only revoloves around all Virgin Rustins 3..well,at least it dissed. las check rubber ducks weren symbol fighters for fags Ringin the tup guess you dialed biters 3...bah.....you still won. kriz.. tht verse you posted was awful,honestly.In a battle,your sopposed to diss/clown/demean the oppenent.Sayin they runnin outta time,or ur'll kill them,does NOT diss the oppenent in any way at all.So stop with the threats and start wit the punches. Defined. also a weak verse from you...but u at least dissed...so...you win. Vote-Defined Drop a vote in the link below..... http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=211896 |
10-18-05, 06:14 PM | #15 | |
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aight uppin for last explained vote..................
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