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10-27-05, 05:13 PM
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Shadow
IP: 4E09 BD1F
SHADOW Just an outline on the wall, an outline on the pavement, following you everywhere you 1st notice it, but ignore it as if you never even seem to know it or even care but its intriguing to you, catching your eye everytime you glance in its direction at first you feel a little afraid and worried, but at the same time in its protection but still you seem unknowing of it to familys, to the shadow,and everyone around still uncertain if it follows you in a hurtfull way, or a good one, it never makes a sound as the days and months go by, the shadow continues to be by your side every step you begin to feel and become familiar with it, but still a lttle tense, and self kept and you notice it never leaves your side, through thick and thin its always there even when your mad and upset, and unleash the fury on it, the shadow still cares more months pass, a space in your heart opens for it, and you feel alive around it notice that even when noonelse is there when your hurt, it is along with an aid kit your compassion for it grows stronger as the harder times come, and it stays with you and all of a sudden it had hit you, with undeniable strength, you loved it and you knew but for some odd reason when your roughest time came, it was nowhere in sight you revisit where you 1st saw the shadow, but it wasnt there, all you felt was fright you went home, straight to your room, and cried in despret need of its affection you think, maybe if i cry, it'll come, maybe if i smile, it'll come, still no detection the months pass and you have finally graduated high school,but the memorys remain you take a walk alone, to try to forget it,and suddenly a gentle grasp has you in detain the shadow, and your heart falls to your stomach as you look into its eyes, and remeber very cold, it takes off its jacket and covers you up, snow fall, start of december but the only thing you could say was, "Why?. When i most needed you, you just left" He whispers "No my sweety, I was always here, becuze in my heart...it was you i kept" and here are my 2 links http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=212644 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=211891
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10-27-05, 05:23 PM
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Coming to Kill you All
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IP: 18C7 DE99
Wow...Defined..
umm..that shit wuz big..and I mean REALLY big.Try to shorten your lines next time so the shit flows.When I 1st looked at it...I figured the shit had internals or something..but it didn't.Your flow wuz bad...honestly... |
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