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Old 11-07-05, 08:54 PM   #1
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17. Narc-Uzi vs. 18. ThatNigga

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Old 11-07-05, 09:43 PM   #2
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Check Check..........................good luck Nigga...........
 
Old 11-09-05, 09:03 PM   #3
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Chiggy Checkaroo!!! Good Luck 2 U 2 Uzi
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Old 11-11-05, 11:27 AM   #4
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This Nigga couldnt "Com Pass" me with That "Directional Device"
He Could "Save" a Cat From a tree and he still wouldnt be "Nice"*

* He got a 1-7 Record*

YOUR Turn Nigga
 
Old 11-11-05, 03:23 PM   #5
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This kids a fuckin pussy,i dont blame him tho
its his moms fault i ran out all those years ago

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Born on March 5th 1989 My Moms so happy she begin to Cry
Had an older Brother by my Side Im just so glad to be Alive
My childhood went fast and such so i cant remember Much
When i turned Eleven it was the first time i rolled a dutch
Had to get high cuz in the bronx there alot of Peer Pressure
Moms had to work 2 jobs just to put 2 shirts in my Dresser
Never had a father to help out but my moms raised me Well
I hate my father so i hope his ass fucking burns in of Hell
I became thirteen and my life became unbelivable Hard
Family was still close but i had my childhood Torn Apart
At this age when i heard gunshots and seen a man dying
I was trying to be tough but of course i began Crying
My brother already on the corner Hustling N getting Doe
I was about to turn 14 and it was my turn to get my GO
My bro had 2 blunts got caught N arrested for 2 Months
My future in the corner got put on hold so for me no Funds
I was 15 and went to my first day in high school it was Hot
When i went home I found out that we jjust got Robbed
It seems like somebody had climed in thru my fire Escape
My moms crying all day so how much more can she Take
And for Gods Sake why did we have all our shit Stolen
Crime began calling but i was controlling my own Fate
So on the Date of sptember 6th we moved down South
In a great place called florida were all its always good Out
Florida is heaven compared to The Bronx no im not Kidding
Cause now im proud to say that im happy the way im Living


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Old 11-11-05, 03:26 PM   #6
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narc uzi;s was really gay... he shoulda put his punch in the opposite order...
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Old 11-11-05, 04:05 PM   #7
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Old 11-11-05, 04:08 PM   #8
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V/Narc......his hit harder to me, wasn't feeling TN's punch that much, felt it couldve been better
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Old 11-11-05, 04:33 PM   #9
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v/Narc-Uzi

cuz that shyt was funny, think about it it starts countin down then it b like Continue??? hahahahahahah

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Old 11-11-05, 04:46 PM   #10
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Narc, you got this, but no need to quote your wordplay n' shit, ya made the post look newbish.

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Old 11-11-05, 04:48 PM   #11
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Narc, you got this, but no need to quote your wordplay n' shit, ya made the post look newbish.

Vote - Narc

He is a newb though. Or at least is still on that level.
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Old 11-11-05, 04:54 PM   #12
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lol, I know. I was just trying to give him advice so even if he is a newb, it won't be extremely obvious.
 
Old 11-11-05, 07:35 PM   #13
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v/Narc-Uzi

cuz that shyt was funny, think about it it starts countin down then it b like Continue??? hahahahahahah

werd

dayum... talk about hate vote? lmao..........
 
Old 11-11-05, 07:47 PM   #14
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This Nigga couldnt "Com Pass" me with That "Directional Device"
He Could "Save" a Cat From a tree and he still wouldnt be "Nice"*


ok nice set up. it was an aiight usage of wordplay. but the second line was BOOOOOOOOTY. homie you would of had this if you finished it off better

5/10


This kids a fuckin pussy,i dont blame him tho
its his moms fault i ran out all those years ago

shit was basic. but funny. the set up was good. the second line was funny but harsh. straight shit

vote: that nigga
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Old 11-11-05, 08:47 PM   #15
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Narc: Came weak as fuck, didnt hit too hard but was a punch none the less.

TN: Ummm, you had a decent concept camoflaged out by horrific wording and that.

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