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Old 11-14-05, 09:38 PM   #1
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Old 11-14-05, 09:48 PM   #2
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no not this beat.. its so played out... anyways... hook im not likin vocals need lowerin... flow is pretty good.. sounds awkward at times.. its very repetitive in the way it flows... u really need to learn to work ur levels better.... too much reverb aswell it sounds like ur kinda like a robot... lyrics are ok.. but pretty simple.. yet not bad.. better than alot on here but not suttin id pay for
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Old 11-14-05, 09:59 PM   #3
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yeah..i'm just gettin back into this..i been sick
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Old 11-15-05, 04:35 PM   #4
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Old 11-15-05, 06:03 PM   #5
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Listening...

Beat is coo...vocals were pretty loud...it has an echoey sound to it...trash that...makes some words hard to understand. Maybe it's my speakers I dunno...but anyway...flow is decent...lyrics are decent...delivery was alright but the echo is bad...decent, I know what its like to be rusty.

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Old 11-16-05, 02:09 PM   #6
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Okay. Honestly... It was a track I'd listen to. Infact. I downloaded it. I'm not much on being able to tell you the technical aspects of the audio, I can tell you from what I listened to, the lyrics are simple, but sometimes simple is better. I do it every once in a while. Nice Work, I'm glad that I peeped this track. rtf.
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Old 11-16-05, 06:34 PM   #7
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love this beat

flow and lyrics is kinda basic but flow is on point..kinda sounds west coastish...not my style..

decent track but not my thing..
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